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Anthony J
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working on this one too
some woman in an ad i ripped out of a magazine
just trying to match colours as best as possible by eye, as well as capturing the main features..
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Curi0us_George
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| Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2001 8:15 pm |
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| Umm, it looks good, but you really shouldn't post images that large. Provide a link if you want to post the full-res version. Not everyone has a T3. :) |
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Anthony J
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| Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2001 8:17 pm |
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err what do you mean??
lol  sorry i posted a MASSIVELY large
image, its all cool now
hehehe
i could have stuck to my guns and suggested that you were insane
*kidding*
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Lukias
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| Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2001 8:32 pm |
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Hey I like this.
Quite bland (for use of a better word).
For starters apply a bg that doesn't blend so much with her.
Add some depth, larger range of values and some well placed highlights.
Shes got sexy lips.
Is this straight over a photo? |
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Anthony J
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Lukias
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| Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2001 9:01 pm |
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Yeah yeah, sorry, I realised after I posted that my comments only really related to a finished piece.
I suppose *bland* is exceptable....after all its work in progress.
PROPER comments- It looks great (now I'm simply boring). |
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Curi0us_George
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| Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2001 11:02 pm |
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My only real suggestion would be to incorporate a larger range of colors. If you want to stick with only tans, that's cool. I like mono-hue images. However, you will really need to play out the shadows and highlights if you are going to go all-tan. Also, work on the background soon. It will make it easier for others (as well as yourself) to critique your work. Having a better background will help identify the focal point. Everything kind of blends together right now.
By the way, I would've dug the big image out of my browser cache just to prove you were lying.  Well, maybe if I suddenly grew out of my laziness. . . like that could actually happen . . . . |
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Nex
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| Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2001 2:16 am |
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I like the diffuse lighting situation here.
I think, other than Lukias, that the lips make her looks somehow strange. it looks like she is pressing them together with all her might.
other than that it looks nice to me |
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Anthony J
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| Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2001 7:21 pm |
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thanks for the feedback , excellent !
i'll do some work on background
shadow / highlights
here's progress so far
just tiny refining that nobody can prolly see
cause the IMAGE is way LARGE ! 
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Dthind
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| Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2001 8:12 pm |
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| I mean this in a complimentary way, I like the simplicity of the image. It does not force the viewer into hunting for meaning... |
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