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Anthony
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 Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2001 11:36 am |
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OK, this pic is for a friend's wedding. I'm about 2 hours in I'd say(including several design sketches that I let him choose from).
And yes, they'll be flesh colored when I'm done :]
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Dthind
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| Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2001 10:11 pm |
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| Reduce the brides dress in the overall image. |
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Anthony
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| Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2001 10:47 pm |
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Thanks for the comment DThind. You'll forgive me if I follow my own instincts on this one, I like the dress. :] Anyway, here's an update.
I think that's as far as I'll take it, since the guy's happy with it. Thanks again for the feedback,
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[This message has been edited by Anthony (edited March 18, 2001).] |
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Curi0us_George
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| Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2001 2:26 pm |
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The groom's shoulders look a bit uneven. Try lowering the right (his right) one and raising the left one. Well, at least I hope that's the groom, and not the best man. :)
I like the dress, but just make sure it doesn't detract to much from the subjects (unless, of course, if you want the big ethereal dress to be the focal point). |
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