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Hurri-cane · Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2001 3:46 am

input, crits, hate mails are welcome

.caneman

Nex · Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2001 6:49 am

*sends 120kB hatemail*

I like the pose, the composition and the anatomy (maybe the nose looks a bit large)

I like the red down there too but I think you could find a better color up there (than violet).. hmm.

well just my opinion.. no hard facts here =)

looking forward to the final then

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- Nex

Mary, sweet lady of pain, always alone
Blind you search for the truth
I see myself in you, parallel lives
Winding at light-speed through time
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Hurri-cane · Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2001 8:57 am

my trustworthy companion Nex !
u saved me from the totally replyless death

yea, the top color needs to be changed...

ill remember to post the final ver. later on then

.caneman

Keto · Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2001 6:57 pm

i really freagin like it , my only problems with it are, the halo he has does not look like it goes around his head it looks like it is stuck IN his head. secondly i think the wings are a little to bright, I like how there is no inividual wing definition but i cant think of another way to darken the wings.

awesome piece, pose, expression and colors rule.

Tommy · member Member # Joined: 30 Jan 2001 Posts: 142

Hey Hur|. Cool looking angel. The red looks real good in there. One small problem I see is in the abs. Maybe you could make them slightly wider. And being picky here, he looks like he is lacking some neck on his right side. Other than that, very nice work.

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-Tommy

"The only difference between me and a madman is that I'm not mad."
- Salvador Dali (1904-1989)

Staff Sarge · Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2001 1:48 am

Maybe those wings need some of that red light glowing from the Pits of Hell - also they're a bit too clean and bright. The halo makes me think he's dizzy or something... but I'm sure that's just me & my lack of sleep.

I like the nice, strong colours... that, and the perspective. And the concept.

Hurri-cane · Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2001 2:22 am

Keto : yea, the halo needs to be changed, i thought about that. and the wings need a serius paintover, but i havent gotten around to do it....hehe..

Tommy: yea, i guess so, i'll go over the anatomi and try to find the errors..

Staff sarge : i havent painted the wings yet, only the basic color.

THANKS all for the replys

.caneman