[Jaku]

http://www.angelfire.com/scifi/jaku/
This is my first post. Is a quick lighting test. Please critique it.


[This message has been edited by Jaku (edited March 15, 2001).]

[Nex]

angelfire does not allow outside linking.

you can put it on a webpage or use a different host.

[Curi0us_George]

I'm not really an artist, but since art isn't created just for other artists, I'll comment anyway. I think you drawing is rather interesting.

My only comment would be that the ear looks somewhat detached. However, I don't really know how to fix it, with the extreme darkness. Perhaps try to show some area of attachment. Either the front or the bottom, but if you choose to attach at the bottom of the ear, I would make the ear more "animalistic." The current ear is more humanoid, leadng the viewer to expect the skin on the front to merge with the cheek. But, I'm not an artist.

Anyway, you should build a web page f you want to host at Angelfire. Just provide a link to the page with the images. Don't try to link directly to the images. It won't work.