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LordArioch
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 14, 2001 10:53 am     Reply with quote
Just havin' some fun with period costumes.





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PostPosted: Wed Mar 14, 2001 4:48 pm     Reply with quote
Neat I like the leg wear on the first figure. As for crit: IMHO both drawings seem rather flat. For example: in the first one there doesn't seem to be any depth in the character's eyes and features, they appear flat and boring to me. Same goes with her left hand. The arm is in foreshortening and moving to the left, yet the surface of the hand appears straight on, when it should appear at more of an angle. You tried to compensate with the fingers being curved but it just makes the hand look awkward.

Well I guess it might just be me, but I thought I'd try to give a little constructive crit. Good Luck
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