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Eric Pommer member
Member # Joined: 08 Feb 2001 Posts: 134 Location: Toronto, Canada
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2001 6:54 am |
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Hi all,
This is my first attempt at colouring a pencil sketch digitally, and was my first attempt to use photoshop for anything serious, so please be gentle. I know there is still lots to do, but any general newbie advice would be appreciated.
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oscar member
Member # Joined: 22 Feb 2001 Posts: 103 Location: Amersfoort � the Netherlands
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2001 7:01 am |
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The image has a lot of potential... it looks good already, but the shadow areas look a bit pale (gray-ish). I think you should add some red/brown to 'em. Good job otherwise! |
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Eric Pommer member
Member # Joined: 08 Feb 2001 Posts: 134 Location: Toronto, Canada
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2001 1:30 pm |
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Thanks for the comments thus far...I've uploaded my day's work. I've tried to add more colour, warming the shadows up and making the whole thing a little less grey.
The legs originally were that short on paper because of size restrictions...it never really dawned on me that I don't have to follow those restrictions here. I think I'll adjust that, as I've always thought they should be longer too.
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Staff Sarge member
Member # Joined: 04 Feb 2001 Posts: 177 Location: finland
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2001 1:34 pm |
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Looks great, keep that brush moving and post an update too, please
One thing to point out is that I'd picture the nymph with a bit more natural makeup... I'm not sure though, I've never met one either! |
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Spring member
Member # Joined: 26 Jan 2001 Posts: 51 Location: Aurora, CO, USA
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2001 12:24 am |
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Are her legs supposed to be that short? |
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Wiked Ewok member
Member # Joined: 19 Aug 2000 Posts: 215 Location: San Francisco, CA USA
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2001 12:30 am |
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Oooh, very nice. Her face seems a bit bubbly though. And yea, the leg looks a bit short, even though they are fading into the tree(they look a bit clipped?).
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SoMK member
Member # Joined: 04 Jun 2000 Posts: 237 Location: Montreal, Canada
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2001 12:35 am |
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Yeah, it's starting good :p Anatomically slightly strange around the neck or under her arms but I've never met woodnymphs mind you :p
I was a bit surprised too not to find longer legs/trunk when I scrolled down but hey, you're the driver :) I've got a question though, are the grey patches for example on her right shoulder shadows of leaves above her ? Ah, one more thing, I've always felt it easier to start painting on an already coloured background, I mean with the basic light and dark colours, to help the figure blending in it... Just 2 cents (I accept visa card) Keep on posting the work in progress , I really like your art (and web site :))
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2001 12:36 am |
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good drawing technique. a suggestion - do a dark line drawing then fill in the whole picture with light color washes....then start to go into the details.
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Eric Pommer member
Member # Joined: 08 Feb 2001 Posts: 134 Location: Toronto, Canada
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Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2001 2:11 pm |
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Thanks for the comments...I'll use that wash idea for future drawings I have in the works. I've posted an updated version up top...I've extended the image to make more room for the legs.
I think I know what you mean about the 'bubbly' face Ewok...I think I might just live with it though. I feel like I just want to get this one finished and on to the next one.
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