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Christofer · Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2001 4:16 pm

This is my first post to this forum and my fist step towards perfection in form and coloring. This is where you you come in to place; I NEED your say on what to do to reach the phenomenal standard Iv seen here. The thing that I need to know is what�s wrong with this picture in its form and what I can do to correct them. The more faults you find with it the happier I�ll become, because I will bee one step closer to perfection.

Here it is:

Thanks for all your healp.

GreenPeach · Guest Member #

Dont seek perfection, seek truth.

GreenPeach · Guest Member #

No, wait. Seek beauty.

Sorry Christofer, Im an idiot. But here's my advice, get someone to sit still for you while you draw them, anyone. If this proves impossible, find an anatomy drawing book at the library. I could try to help you with this particular picture but I've given you the best advice I can. Other people here are better at specifics anyway. Good luck and welcome to the forum.

Visionary · Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2001 8:11 pm

You want perfection and you draw breasts that are perfect spheres... I'm sorry but I almost fell off my chair laughing.

My best advice is to draw draw draw.

Welcome to the forums!

-Visionary

PixelPusher · Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2001 8:34 pm

ok ...yes you need to get an anatomy book and study it draw all the parts of the body I've been doing it for a few months and still suck at them...you may want to try a book called drawing on the right side of the brain..VERY GOOD BOOK...and if you are good at math which most artist are try some books on M.C. Escher there are several that go in depth about his use of math and art....
good luck...and stick with it..

SoMK · Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2001 6:34 am

cool start... I'll just ring my bell the same way the others did. Get an anatomy book and practice. Try George Bridgman, he helps a lot understanding human mechanisms and how to work with light/dark areas and not only lines...

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Christofer · Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2001 1:42 pm

Thanks for your help. I'll run down to library now and see what books they have. If I find one I like realy well I'll buy it.

Once again thanks.

Christofer · Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2001 11:28 am

Lookie lookie I colored it in. What do you think?

Rag · Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2001 1:50 pm

Try this site, excellent book to teach you figure drawing and it's all online.
http://antsin3d.com/loomis/

Metz · Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2001 12:35 am

its a great start..
but some parts looks abit wrong, like the neck/shoulders.. along with the head shape.
things looks abit better on the colored one though.

keep it up. do lots more

~Metz
http://metz.xrs.net

Metz · Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2001 12:37 am

great expression btw

Christofer · Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2001 2:40 am

Thanks for the tip

three55ml · junior member Member # Joined: 22 Feb 2001 Posts: 13

Maybe it's just me, but I've never seen breasts like that

They're extremely deformed looking. And a little too round.

Christofer · Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2001 3:23 am

I know, they look a litle like tenisballs stuft down her blouse dont they?

When you dont have any thing to go after you tend to draw them the way you think they look like

bigtex · junior member Member # Joined: 09 Mar 2001 Posts: 35

wow i havent seen breasts like that since i watched the porno debbie does dallas lol

the neck looks like its broken

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