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oscar
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 27, 2001 1:31 am     Reply with quote
It has been a while since I posted here, and not many of you will probably remember me (a.k.a. oscar alexander)... In fact, I've been gone so long, I had to reregister because I forgot my username/password. Shit on me

Anyway, I've been really busy with freelance webdesign/school lately, and had very little time to stick into a new digital art project. I'm planning to change this soon, and decided to get back to Sijun.com. Here's an old pic I never finished (and never will):



And another one.

[This message has been edited by oscar (edited February 27, 2001).]
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 27, 2001 4:28 am     Reply with quote
Very good painting...
Can you tell us how to make the skin tones like you do ?

How you make your paintings ?

Thanks ,
Ricardo Figueira (RBFIGUEIRA) www.rbfigueira.cjb.net


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PostPosted: Tue Feb 27, 2001 5:13 am     Reply with quote
Very nice skin tones. good likeness. A couple of things. The jaw looks a bit long and wonky. Mabey moving it up and to the left a little may help. Also the right (my right) eye looks wierd. The left one is good, but the right..hmmmm, I think the Iris may be too big, not sure.
Good work though!
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Marvel
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 27, 2001 5:45 am     Reply with quote
Yup, the skin tone is quite nice, but I'd say your eyes really don't work like that, they're like turned too much and/or the iris size/shape is wrong. Seems to me shw has two single eyes and not a pair.

Not too bad anyhow.
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zenonithus
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 27, 2001 6:08 am     Reply with quote
How about this? Hope you don't mind. I've re-shaped the face and done some work on the eyes and nose. Hope it helps.

zenon

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 27, 2001 6:12 am     Reply with quote
Oh...! If you ever get back to it, that is!
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 27, 2001 1:22 pm     Reply with quote
That certainly looks much better now. There's still something a little strange with the eyes, but the overall shape of everything now comes together much nicer.

Nice job.

Roy
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 27, 2001 3:07 pm     Reply with quote
Gak! Fix those eyes, my little nephew started crying when she saw them.
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Jason
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 27, 2001 4:52 pm     Reply with quote
Love the eyes!
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 27, 2001 5:47 pm     Reply with quote
not bad, is the hairline a little bit to high?

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travis travis
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 28, 2001 6:39 am     Reply with quote
I'd leave it at that. No need to overwork an already solid piece, nice.
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oscar
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 28, 2001 11:25 am     Reply with quote
Thanks lads!

Zenon, thanks for the make-over. It looks better indeed! The eyes looked funny to me too, but the shapes were *almost* identical to what I saw on the reference pic... (the vertical offset was too big though) Have a look:



Oh, and the skintone is just a combination of reds, yellows and browns (figures, eh?)

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jasonN
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 28, 2001 10:52 pm     Reply with quote
Hey Oscar, nice to see you back!
Your pic looks really nice, I love the rendering. Looking forward to seeing more of your pics!

-Jason
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2001 6:57 am     Reply with quote
Cool! Yeah sorry, I meant the shading and the highlight painting was what I liked about the skin, but the tone is nice also. She looks alot younger in the photo, but still a babe, as ever!
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