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Tyler Walpole
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 28, 2001 12:19 am     Reply with quote
Hello all, long time listener first time caller, love your show.

My name is Tyler, and I draw comics and interior B&W illos for the game industry. I don't do a whole lot of digital stuff yet (I'll be getting a tablet soon! ). But people around here seem to have a lot of good observations, and suggestions regarding art all around, not digital art alone. So I thought I'd post this pic to get some feedback.



This is the first pic I've done in quite a while that I'm actually nervous about inking. Which brings me to the question part...Anyone know of a good tutorial for digital inking that you could point me to?

Thanks, and nice to meet you all.

Tyler

PS-

If anyone is bored and feels like adding some color to this; feel free. I'd love to see it.
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Collosimo
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 28, 2001 3:27 am     Reply with quote
Hey I cant see it!

I just get an image hosted by angelfire picture.

get another host.

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 28, 2001 3:46 am     Reply with quote
Tyler, very nicely shaded.. looks really cool...

the teeth look wrong tho, specifically the right top corner tooth... and the tongue looks a bit odd... other then that I really like it

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 28, 2001 6:29 am     Reply with quote
to people: if you can't see an image, like this one because the host doesn't allow it, or IE's loading bug -- left click on the red x, select properties and copy and paste its url. there.

now for this pic, pretty cool. the good thing about digital is you're free to go at it without wrecking anything. just create a new layer and experiment, there are probably some useful and less useful tutorials out there, but most has to be picked up by trying things out
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Tyler Walpole
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 28, 2001 8:14 am     Reply with quote
Here's the final inks on this one folks. What do you think?

Strata- you're right about the teeth, looks like I shoulda moved the gumline up a bit on that side. I sure wish I could have read your post before I had to ink it...stinkin' deadline.
As far as the tounge goes...I thought it looked funny too, but I was the most convenient model I could find for this, and I swear that's what your toung does if you make a vampire hissing face. Okay...that's almost what it does, I flubbed it a little bit, cause I thought it looked even funnier as a big ball of muscle at the back of the mouth.

Thanks for the crit!


PS
Colosimo, I've got my own domain that will be running soon, so hopefully there will be no more angelfire pics in the next couple weeks. I hope you can see this one.

[This message has been edited by Tyler Walpole (edited February 28, 2001).]
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NiM
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 28, 2001 8:16 am     Reply with quote
Doesnt Dhabih have a tutorial on the first page of http://www.sijun.com ? *throws in some popcorn then runs off to check*

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 01, 2001 1:30 am     Reply with quote
I already knew about that right click properties>copy>paste

It still doesnt work for me. Must be angelfire because it just loads that silly image hosted by, but this time in its own window when you do the above trick.

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Tyler Walpole
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 01, 2001 1:43 am     Reply with quote
Collosimo-Here's a direct link to the pencils, and one for the inked version. Those should work for you, no?

Howsabout you other folks? Are the images showing up for you, or are you just getting that "silly image hosted by" thing?

Tyler
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Tyler Walpole
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 01, 2001 1:47 am     Reply with quote
quote:
Originally posted by NiM:
Doesnt Dhabih have a tutorial on the first page of http://www.sijun.com ? *throws in some popcorn then runs off to check*




Not a digital inking one. He's got a cool one for painting, but not inking.

Tyler
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