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JET
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 27, 2001 4:28 am     Reply with quote
Hi everyone, been lurking for the past 2 weeks. This is my first post, a work in progress of a picture i drew and in the process of coloring. Any comments and criticisms are welcome. TIA

JT

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CrashWick
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 27, 2001 7:01 am     Reply with quote
Looking pretty good... you coold give her panties a lil more detail though
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Unit
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 27, 2001 8:23 am     Reply with quote
That's crazy! I love the line work and her expression's great.

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Lukias
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 27, 2001 1:45 pm     Reply with quote
This is looking good, I'm liking the panties(purely for art reasons), the transparency is great.
crit- her thighs are to thin, definitley to thin but maybe thats your intention.

finish it.
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