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Gecko
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Well, sir, someone should hit you with a stick for not using that time developing your skills further :]
I like it, from belt down the pose looks odd. I'd prefer longer legs on him, but yada yada matter of opinion yada.
You've done a lot of this in the past, right?
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sacrelicious
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| Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2001 5:39 pm |
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Cool pic! I especially like the ears and the devilish grin. The legs are a bit odd, but I'm sure they'll look better once the background is added. Great!
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Cannibal
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| Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2001 12:26 am |
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I haven't drawn in years but I decided to get back into it. I started sketching the other day and this is what I ended up with. It's finished but I thought I could get some feedback.
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Darklighter
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| Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2001 12:34 am |
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| very nice, a lot of character in his facial expression and his stance.... |
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Socar MYLES
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| Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2001 7:47 am |
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I think the problem isn't with the legs themselves, but with the positioning...It makes the hip area seem a little too short. As if he has no groin. Still, I find it doesn't really matter--this isn't the sort of picture that demands absolute anatomical realism. That little fellow projects short, squat, and ugly, and any attempt to fiddle him into looking real would ruin his character.
Nice work, though. I'd like to see colours, and a background, and more little men running around poking him with sticks...no, scratch that last part, but I do crave colour.
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S4Sb
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| Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2001 1:09 pm |
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I like it as it is! Good work. You going to colour? If not... may I try? May I try? 
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Cos
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| Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2001 7:40 am |
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that is nice man, u should get straight back into drawing again with skills like this.
What I thought looked a little strange was his legs being so apart, like he could have three bumcheeks heh.. But part from that. Post more work! |
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S4Sb
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| Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2001 12:51 am |
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| I wonder why he isn't replying. Seems like he posted once and ran away |
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Cannibal
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| Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2001 6:27 am |
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| Thanks for all of the input, I appreciate it. I'm playing around with some colors now so I'll repost when I've got something to more to show. |
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