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Guylon junior member
Member # Joined: 29 Dec 2000 Posts: 16 Location: Jakarta
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2001 8:49 am |
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If anyone ever played the game, she's TIFA from Final Fantasy VII.
Well, about her chest - the original design was like that . Now working on the Photoshop CG. |
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Zoso member
Member # Joined: 23 Dec 2000 Posts: 132 Location: Stuttgart, Germany
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2001 9:43 am |
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Guylon -
Good looking line art, can't wait to see this one colored. Not sure if you're looking for any crits or not, but her feet and right hand look a bit off. That's one heck of a rack too. Her back must be killing her. |
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ArtKeo member
Member # Joined: 29 Feb 2000 Posts: 115
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2001 2:33 pm |
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Hey, it's retro. FFVII !
I like the left hand. I don't remember her hair bein that long though. |
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Awetopsy member
Member # Joined: 04 Oct 2000 Posts: 3028 Location: Kelowna
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2001 9:05 pm |
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Oooooh I like it. Dont see the point in showing the underwear tho.. and those really are big breasts..
Very clean work. look at yourself in that pose in front of a mirror and see how the hand and feet should look..
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galen member
Member # Joined: 13 Nov 2000 Posts: 172 Location: a computer.
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Guylon junior member
Member # Joined: 29 Dec 2000 Posts: 16 Location: Jakarta
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Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2001 3:29 am |
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Yo, thanks for the crits - i ain't too good with realistic anatomy though, my flaw. Aboud her back ... hehe, the coloring was already done for that, so I guess I'll watch for those on my future drawings.
About her underwear ^^;;, it was just happened, teehee. And about the breast .... well, I guess it was her actual size (un the games, of course) - I wouldn't want to imagine normal real female with that size, though.
Thanks, the CG is on the way about 30-40% completed.
[This message has been edited by Guylon (edited February 18, 2001).] |
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Tovart member
Member # Joined: 21 Jan 2001 Posts: 55 Location: Israel, LOF
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Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2001 3:30 am |
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Allmost every Tifa pic seems to have a pantie shot.
Anyway its cool! ![](http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/smile.gif) |
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shaithis member
Member # Joined: 11 Apr 2000 Posts: 75 Location: Syracuse, NY, USA
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Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2001 1:22 pm |
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Panty shots are a long and historic japanese tradition. :P
If you want to get into the psychology aspect of it, I think the white panties are supposed to symbolize this kind of virginal innocence.
Ditto the (very popular) schoolgirl outfits in a lot of manga.
-shai |
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Guylon junior member
Member # Joined: 29 Dec 2000 Posts: 16 Location: Jakarta
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Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2001 6:52 pm |
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Hey, I didn't know those historic stuffs . Well, after some thoughts I decide to lower her skirt, so her panty isn't visible anymore ^^.
Thanks, you guys're great |
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shaithis member
Member # Joined: 11 Apr 2000 Posts: 75 Location: Syracuse, NY, USA
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Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2001 10:48 pm |
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Heh, well, the "historic" bit was sort of a joke (and sort of not). Panty shots *are* extremely common in Japanese manga though, even the non-hentai, non-pornographic type, for the resons I cited.
Which I believe is why it's prevalent even in video game characters that are, on this side of the ocean, marketed to a much younger audience.
Regardless, the drawing's pretty good, though I agree with the criticisms on the breast size (although I'll also back up the fact that she's drawn, even by Squaresoft artists, with a pretty massive chest).
The nose and mouth alignment also seems a little off to me, though I've been looking at it for awhile, and I can't figure out why.
Eh, anyhoo, it's a nice pic overall. Good work.
-shai
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Guylon junior member
Member # Joined: 29 Dec 2000 Posts: 16 Location: Jakarta
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Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2001 6:52 am |
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Well, it's done
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black_fish member
Member # Joined: 31 Jul 2000 Posts: 333 Location: Los Angeles, California
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Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2001 11:35 am |
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Very nice drawing and very nice painting too, but there is ONE thing wrong: her face is seen almost from the front (which makes sense since her body is turned toward her right, and her head is turning in the other direction). So her face should be seen from the front and be symetrical! That means that your nose and mouth (and a bit of the eyes) are wrong. That should be easy to fix though and you would have a perfect painting ![](http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/smile.gif) |
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Tovart member
Member # Joined: 21 Jan 2001 Posts: 55 Location: Israel, LOF
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Posted: Mon Feb 19, 2001 11:42 am |
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VERY good guylon, the painting is great!
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Guylon junior member
Member # Joined: 29 Dec 2000 Posts: 16 Location: Jakarta
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Posted: Thu Feb 22, 2001 2:41 am |
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Ow, I don't think I'm going to fix it ... or should I? ^^ - Anyway, thanks for the crits, now that you mentioned it (and that I erased her front right hair), her face do looks kinda weird. |
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TheMilkMan member
Member # Joined: 04 Nov 2000 Posts: 797 Location: St.Louis
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Posted: Thu Feb 22, 2001 7:39 am |
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wow...nice work man! |
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Gecko member
Member # Joined: 07 Mar 2000 Posts: 876 Location: Finland
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mac65 junior member
Member # Joined: 25 Jan 2001 Posts: 9 Location: Mountain Home Id
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Posted: Thu Feb 22, 2001 6:35 pm |
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Very nice, the only thing that I noticed is that her left (our right) thumb seems to be in a very unatural position. |
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JeanJean member
Member # Joined: 16 Jun 2000 Posts: 108 Location: St-Ed,Quebec,Canada
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2001 9:01 am |
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really cool...nice and clear
more more!! |
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