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Guylon
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2001 8:49 am     Reply with quote


If anyone ever played the game, she's TIFA from Final Fantasy VII.

Well, about her chest - the original design was like that . Now working on the Photoshop CG.
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2001 9:43 am     Reply with quote
Guylon -

Good looking line art, can't wait to see this one colored. Not sure if you're looking for any crits or not, but her feet and right hand look a bit off. That's one heck of a rack too. Her back must be killing her.
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2001 2:33 pm     Reply with quote
Hey, it's retro. FFVII !


I like the left hand. I don't remember her hair bein that long though.
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2001 9:05 pm     Reply with quote
Oooooh I like it. Dont see the point in showing the underwear tho.. and those really are big breasts..

Very clean work. look at yourself in that pose in front of a mirror and see how the hand and feet should look..



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PostPosted: Sun Feb 18, 2001 12:26 am     Reply with quote
meh, everyone i know always draws her with big breasts, and those arent really that big anyways :/

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Guylon
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 18, 2001 3:29 am     Reply with quote
Yo, thanks for the crits - i ain't too good with realistic anatomy though, my flaw. Aboud her back ... hehe, the coloring was already done for that, so I guess I'll watch for those on my future drawings.

About her underwear ^^;;, it was just happened, teehee. And about the breast .... well, I guess it was her actual size (un the games, of course) - I wouldn't want to imagine normal real female with that size, though.

Thanks, the CG is on the way about 30-40% completed.

[This message has been edited by Guylon (edited February 18, 2001).]
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 18, 2001 3:30 am     Reply with quote
Allmost every Tifa pic seems to have a pantie shot.

Anyway its cool!
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 18, 2001 1:22 pm     Reply with quote
Panty shots are a long and historic japanese tradition. :P

If you want to get into the psychology aspect of it, I think the white panties are supposed to symbolize this kind of virginal innocence.

Ditto the (very popular) schoolgirl outfits in a lot of manga.

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Guylon
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 18, 2001 6:52 pm     Reply with quote
Hey, I didn't know those historic stuffs . Well, after some thoughts I decide to lower her skirt, so her panty isn't visible anymore ^^.
Thanks, you guys're great
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 18, 2001 10:48 pm     Reply with quote
Heh, well, the "historic" bit was sort of a joke (and sort of not). Panty shots *are* extremely common in Japanese manga though, even the non-hentai, non-pornographic type, for the resons I cited.

Which I believe is why it's prevalent even in video game characters that are, on this side of the ocean, marketed to a much younger audience.

Regardless, the drawing's pretty good, though I agree with the criticisms on the breast size (although I'll also back up the fact that she's drawn, even by Squaresoft artists, with a pretty massive chest).

The nose and mouth alignment also seems a little off to me, though I've been looking at it for awhile, and I can't figure out why.

Eh, anyhoo, it's a nice pic overall. Good work.

-shai
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Guylon
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 19, 2001 6:52 am     Reply with quote
Well, it's done
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 19, 2001 11:35 am     Reply with quote
Very nice drawing and very nice painting too, but there is ONE thing wrong: her face is seen almost from the front (which makes sense since her body is turned toward her right, and her head is turning in the other direction). So her face should be seen from the front and be symetrical! That means that your nose and mouth (and a bit of the eyes) are wrong. That should be easy to fix though and you would have a perfect painting
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 19, 2001 11:42 am     Reply with quote
VERY good guylon, the painting is great!

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Guylon
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 22, 2001 2:41 am     Reply with quote
Ow, I don't think I'm going to fix it ... or should I? ^^ - Anyway, thanks for the crits, now that you mentioned it (and that I erased her front right hair), her face do looks kinda weird.
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 22, 2001 7:39 am     Reply with quote
wow...nice work man!
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 22, 2001 5:28 pm     Reply with quote
Very nice stuff. Really sharp & clear way of coloring.

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 22, 2001 6:35 pm     Reply with quote
Very nice, the only thing that I noticed is that her left (our right) thumb seems to be in a very unatural position.
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 23, 2001 9:01 am     Reply with quote
really cool...nice and clear
more more!!
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