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 Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2001 10:14 am |
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I'm having some problems with this piece, I don't know how to continue from now on. Please give crits, overpaint and everything else you find useful. Thanks.
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S4Sb
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| Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2001 10:20 am |
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You used reference? 
I think proportions look kinda wrong. Legs are too short... Arms as well. The helm looks like it is flying over his head, maybe you move it down a bit.
Otherwise I like it a lot. You going to make it coloured?
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S4Sb
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| Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2001 10:23 am |
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Hard pose you chose...
btw... is there a small head on his right breast? |
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col_blahah
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| Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2001 3:01 pm |
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| i agree with s4 on the length on the arms/legs, also his legs are i bit off balance he doesnt seem to be resting on either one, people rest all their weight on one leg, yours could really go either way. It all depends on how you want the picture to look as far as the mood and body language are concerned. beyond that just get some more hard edges(contrast) and pull out some more form and i think you'll be on your way. there are a lot of good things going on I like the sword and i like how youve done the thumb tucked in his waist so far......i see the face that s4 speaks of as well.... |
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col_blahah
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| Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2001 3:02 pm |
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| i agree with s4 on the length on the arms/legs, also his legs are i bit off balance he doesnt seem to be resting on either one, people rest all their weight on one leg, yours could really go either way. It all depends on how you want the picture to look as far as the mood and body language are concerned. beyond that just get some more hard edges(contrast) and pull out some more form and i think you'll be on your way. there are a lot of good things going on I like the sword and i like how youve done the thumb tucked in his waist so far......i see the face that s4 speaks of as well.... |
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SoMK
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| Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2001 4:20 pm |
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Wow.. I agree with S4Sb too, you're brave, I personally dread this kind of poses :p
Anyway, selfdeluded as I am, I'll give it a try.
I just rotated him a bit to his left and lowered his knees... *my 2 cents worth, I accept visa*
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