[Frozen Consciousness]

This is my first post in this Forum... hope it goes down well. Here's just a little picture I've been working on for about an hour and a half. It's far from finished but early critques would be great



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Frozen mind, Frozen cause, Frozen Reality.

[This message has been edited by Frozen Consciousness (edited February 16, 2001).]

[Unit]

Hey Frozen, I like the colours you chose for it, and the shading's cool.
Is it in a fighting stance? It appears that it couldn't move from that position because some of the panels join onto the torso in odd alignment. There seems to be some confusion around the torso in general. Maybe rethink the size of the legs too.

[Zoso]

Pretty cool mech you got going there frozen. I'm with Unit though, the torso seems quite confused. Good design can make or break a mech like this one. I always try to lay out a simple design sketch of something that would concievable work.

Keep it up man, lot's of potential here.

[Frozen Consciousness]

Thanks all for the constructive critism!
I'd like to work a little bit more on the design, but I've started on another mech picture (A restless mind breeds creativity I guess). Its looking better than this one thus far (in my eyes anyway).