[Simon Gustafsson]

Well here is another lifless creature. Intresting study. Hopefully im learning SOMETHING. I know her neck looks wrong. Havent given it much thought yet. If anything else looks wierd, please point it out and suggest how I can fix it. =)
Values.





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[Bubonic]

great job on the whole pic, i love the lighting and the neck looks fine. you gonna give her a body hopefully?

[SporQ]

her right eye, our left, could use a bit more contrast. the darks would be at least as dark as the ones on the left eye, pupil and eyelashes and such. the lack of contrast tends to push it back and the eyes don't look like they are on the same plane..

i really like the rest of it though, nice, solid forms.

SporQ

[nightmare]

i think its wonderful! i especially like the lips, they're very realistic. perhaps the eyebrow thats in shadow is a little too high? thats the only thing i can think of thats not perfect in this picture...

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[Nex]

I like this

I made a bunch of them too but they were not that good.

crit: I think the bright part on the darker side of the face is a bit too bright. may be wrong however.

Thanks btw.. through your picture I learned something.. the shadow on the eyeball always forgot about that one.

[Simon Gustafsson]

OK, thank you all. I made som minor changes here and there.



Does it look right now? Is the face finished? should I continue? Please! I need your help.
Feel free to try to put some colour to it.


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[Light]

Nice.. You can make it stronger by either chopping off the picture from her hairline up or giving more room to vertical.

Or maybe showing more body.

[Joachim]

I think it looks very nice, especially when you made the bright background. Maybe you could tone down the contrast in the face as well. ?!? I think this image fits for b/w.

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