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Freaker
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This is my 3rd try on Photoshop. It needs a lil work on highlights and giving it a 3d form (which is the biggest problem of mine)...putting some background aint bad idea though, but its a big thing for me to make it real.... 
I dont quite like the highlight on the window, but i cant understand, whats wrong with it too.
Any critics and comments are really welcom. tnx
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Freaker
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| Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 3:17 am |
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dam, the link was broken....now its okay  |
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jeffery
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| Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 11:17 am |
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wow, nice rendering of the big shapes. i'm always impressed by good paintings of vehicles & cars, because for some reason i can never do them. you should go into and start working on the details and flesh this painting out a bit, it could end up looking really nice.
the one thing that throws me off a bit is the bright shine at the left.. is this from a headlight? if so, why is the other headlight off? i guess one could be burnt out, but it.. doesn't really help the suspension of disbelief.
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Covenant
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| Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 2:28 pm |
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That rocks. I esp like how the back light is so bright it almost washed out the front edge of the car.
As far as the reflection you mentioned, the only thing I can see is it sorta breaks the line of the top of the glass. Where the reflection and the edge of the glass meet. It gives me the impression the glass is bent in right there. I think if the top of the glass was more crisp and straight it would take care of the problem.
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Freaker
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| Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 5:18 pm |
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| K, gonna do it next thing tomorrow morning, now im so sleepy, that i go bed....anyways, if someone has url or pic to show, how to make REALLY reflexible glas ground to all thin, i'd be greatful |
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Freaker
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| Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2001 12:23 am |
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that highlight is not from headlight, its from behind the car (maybe some other car with headlights on) or some other light-source...i thought to make the ground to be like a glas, but it appeared to be HEAVY difficul, so i left the idea and made itr usual....but i aint gonna post it yet....
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