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Psionic
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I modelled her very simply in a 3d package and the rest is done in PS, my biggest problem with it is the face, I am not sure whether to get rid of the mask and paint her face or leave the mask but work it a bit more, what do you Clever dudes out there think?
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| Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2001 2:52 pm |
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I would make sure to make a distinction between the face and the mask.. as it is it looks more like an alien...
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| Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2001 3:10 pm |
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Umm, I think the overall problem is the with the head and the body. One thing the head is a little to small, and you can definitely tell that the head and body were done in 2 separate art packages, What you want to try and achieve is a flow throughout piece.. Maybe try doing the body in PS instead of 3d, or make the model with a head in 3d..
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Psionic
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| Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2001 12:25 am |
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This is my latest pic, its just a small section of it, I could do with some crit also its done with a mouse, DAMN I need a Wacom!!!!! 
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[This message has been edited by Psionic (edited February 08, 2001).] |
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Psionic
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| Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2001 2:21 am |
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Yep the head is too small and doesn't quite fit, like you say. Needs more work, thanks for the crit m8, much appreciated.
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| Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2001 5:46 am |
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| her hair looks like those rice noodles.. how did you do that? |
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Psionic
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| Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2001 6:57 am |
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I scanned in 428 Rice Noodles....nah, just the smudge tool and and some nifty Mouse-work 
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| Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2001 9:21 am |
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I like this picture, especially the hair and the face..
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| Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2001 9:53 am |
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| Yes I would say that the face and hair are the strongest part of this picture. Back grounds not bad ither. But i think you have the art skills to pull this picture off with out having to use a 3d program. Yes the shiny sute of this chick looks cool but photo shop also alowes some amazing things. |
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| Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2001 1:24 pm |
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LOVE the hair...
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Psionic
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| Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2001 1:34 pm |
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Thanks for all the comments, It still needs a lot more work the 3d stuff was very basic spheres and stuff it has been heavily modified in Photoshop, but its just me trying out different methods and stuff, heh heh.
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| Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 1:37 pm |
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you�re really good with the mouse.
When I first saw the topic i tought it was an classic assasin with to big guns and a long coat!!
But it was an future inspired assasin in the space, but i like it!! good job,
looking towards to see the final drawing..
//micke - macho2k
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