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Scion
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 07, 2001 4:39 pm     Reply with quote
Here's 2 drawings that I retraced and scanned in, plan on coloring them in with my wacom once I get it in a few weeks, plz tell me what you think!





Here's the above image that I sketched in before retracing it-



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LeChuck
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 07, 2001 4:56 pm     Reply with quote
I like the dragon picture a lot.
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Hurri-cane
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 08, 2001 6:48 am     Reply with quote
try to add alittle more line weight so that the shapes are easier to understand...

well i dont have anything more to say

looks good, wanna see em colored tho


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Cuddly
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 08, 2001 7:07 am     Reply with quote
Hi Scion,

you asked for crits so here we go:

The head, neck and shoulders of the first character seem to be a little too small for the rest of the body (I assume that's the head showing from under the big collar thing).

The anatomy of the figure in the second drawing is a bit off as well.

Now the parts I liked:

Love the dragon creature. Are those the nostrils or eyes in the snout area?

Love the overall fantasy feel of the pieces. The original sketch is quite good in terms of line weights and shading. If you could translate that to your final painting, I think you'd have a pretty good looking piece.

Look forward to seeing the final art.
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CrakBEENie
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 10, 2001 9:21 pm     Reply with quote
you got the imagination and like to draw...go to life drawing and study rendering....good work
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