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Hurri-cane · Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2001 4:28 pm

see any faults, personaly i think the hand part looks funky...something isnt right..

crit it yall

.caneman

Dryfire · Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2001 4:38 pm

Wow, thats really nice. I'd work on those chest bones though, they seem a bit too large. nice pic though

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burn0ut · Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2001 4:56 pm

Heres something to keep in mind hurri..

Hurri-cane · Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2001 5:02 pm

burnout: that crossing line or what ?
well if its that, good

thanks, might do the trick...well any more faults with it ?

well im gonna redo the whole arm, it needs more "power". hehe
[edit: more rant]
.caneamn

[This message has been edited by Hurri-cane (edited February 05, 2001).]

burn0ut · Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2001 5:07 pm

just shows that the wrist doesnt touch the ground if you lay your arm down, its always held up by your palm, unless your hand is in a up postion :/

Hurri-cane · Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2001 5:09 pm

burnout: yea, didnt think of that, i dont know so much..heeh...it shows :/

thanks !!

.caneman

Hurri-cane · Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2001 1:51 am

*sigh* BUMP !

Nex · Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2001 3:17 am

looks cool so far!

you could put her eyes a bit more in shadow.. so they stand more out visually (you know this vampyric hypnotic gaze)... maybe even have an object cast a shadow over her eyes and make them glow slightly white or sth... hmm just my 2p

Bubonic · Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2001 5:22 am

i like it, except it looks like she has 3 butt cheeks

Jenn · Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2001 5:31 am

HUrr! Looking good.. just fix that finger and add some Bg

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Hurri-cane · Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2001 6:06 am

nex: ill fiddle around with it

bubonic: yea, ill fix that.

jenn: yea, on its way

thanks for the reply u 3

-caneman

Hurri-cane · Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2001 10:12 am

UPDATED THE PIC YO

.cane 'ma nigga' man

Nex · Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2001 2:18 am

*bump*

I hope I get to see the finished version

Eric Pommer · Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2001 6:05 am

Very interesting! I can offer a couple suggestions, since you asked...

I would crop some of the blackness above her...this should make her stand out a little bit more. Right now that darkness is awfully heavy and she looks a little oppressed by it. By the size of her biceps, I get the impression she is supposed to be more dominant in the pic.

Her right butt-cheek is far more raised than the left, which makes it look like she is supporting all of her weight on one leg. If she is lying flat, they should be more equal.

I like the content...something about the seductive pose on top of a coffin lid is a nicely-disturbing contrast.

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Frost · Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2001 6:22 am

Hey Hurri =)

Nice to see you posting as of late, very cool!

That's a nice image, I like it lots. I think some of the anatomy looks asymetrical goign through the perspective, like her butt cheeks for example...