[tyron]

hi.... i've been working on this one for a while now, i started to lay out some colors as you can see in the first pic...
the second one is the lineart since i would really appreciate if someone could show me how they would shade and things like that.

and the lineart:
i need help on this one so please give it a shot..
laters!

[nightmare]

y's she tiptoeing like that?
do u want flat shading or realistic?

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[tyron]

i was looking for comic like coloring..

why she's tiptoening? no idea, i just drew it =)

[Ko]

Nice start!

But you need to work more on the proportions...

The arm holding the staff is much too long. Outstreched, it would reach past her knees like a monkey... It's the upper arm which is much too long.

(Get one of those wooden dolls, that I can't remember the name of, they are great for doing poses)

Ko

[ArtKeo]

Hi, this is just to give you a general idea on how to color it. I hope it helps.

[tyron]

Hey! that's awesome! thank you ArtKeo!
but, i did this before i saw your little tutorial...
it's a bit saturated.
i also fixed the arm.

thanks again!