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FrustratedARTist
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 Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2001 6:28 pm |
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Here can any of you tell me whats wrong with him... I've to get the foot back right but I'm not sure if I did...
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ZenDrag0n
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| Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2001 9:48 pm |
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The foot that's on the ground seems in an awkard position. Try to think more about how it really would be. In fact go outside, and start running like that, then pay attention how they feel, and look at them.
The leg that's bent so much: The thigh should be in front of the other, as the knee only bends close to that much when the leg is coming forward to be planted again. Also, you have it going to the right side of the image/away from the character, which makes it look like a knock kneed 8 year old girl running, with her legs flailing to the side. Once again, go take a little run yourself and pay attention. |
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FrustratedARTist
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| Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2001 10:16 pm |
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Is that better?..
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