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Andy`Ba
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Hi.
I'm the newbie.
I wanted to say that I'm new to this forum.
Oh and I'm new to 2D graphics too.
I've just received my wacom so I'm cool now  .
No!!! I wanted to say that I'm happy now!!!
And here is mu first digital 2D image:
Hey any critique is welcome.
Thanks everyone who will answer
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Ujn Hunter
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| Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2001 6:12 pm |
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good work for your first effort... overall it looks alright... but the eye (the left eye... his left eye...) seems "stuck" on... if you know what i mean? it's out of place...
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S4Sb
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| Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 9:10 am |
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I really like it and you seem to have a quite good knowledge about anatomy. all seems to be correct to me..
You drew in another media before?
cancel all that above if you used reference
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Andy`Ba
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| Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 8:19 pm |
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Here is the new version.
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Andrew Coval
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| Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 11:36 pm |
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| An overall nice image, although there are few things I would touch up, his lips look a little awkward, the right eye seems to be a bit misplaced, the two eyelids are to different the left one has depth but the right one is shapeless. Keep posting... |
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Andy`Ba
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| Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 11:46 pm |
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quote:
Originally posted by S4Sb:
[b]I really like it and you seem to have a quite good knowledge about anatomy. all seems to be correct to me..
You drew in another media before?
Thanks
Actualy I'm a 3D artist. So I had to know some anatomy to model heads. http://www.web3dservice.com/3D/head.html
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cancel all that above if you used reference
Hey. I haven't. Thats all mine.
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Andy`Ba
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| Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 11:54 pm |
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quote:
Originally posted by Andrew Coval:
An overall nice image, although there are few things I would touch up, his lips look a little awkward, the right eye seems to be a bit misplaced, the two eyelids are to different the left one has depth but the right one is shapeless. Keep posting...
Yeah. Lips are my eternal problem
How can I correct the placement of the eye?
Thanks.
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Iris
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| Posted: Wed Jan 24, 2001 9:46 am |
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The new version is better,hope the third attempt will be excellent. No harm is trying!
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Andy`Ba
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| Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2001 12:52 am |
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Wow!
Thanks Sa-ge, that is really helpful.
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Andy`Ba
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| Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2001 1:12 am |
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A good friend of mine showed me some mistakes.
Any suggestions?
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Iris
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| Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2001 9:52 am |
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I think you should learn to construct basic forms of the head.
Then to add details.
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