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Bizarde
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 27, 2001 11:52 am     Reply with quote
think i had a sparkle today, and look what came out. feel free to give a crit for this one, i'm sure is something wrong to it.


~bizarde
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burn0ut
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 27, 2001 2:36 pm     Reply with quote
that kicks much ass bizarde!
my favorite from ya
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 27, 2001 3:04 pm     Reply with quote
whoah, thats nice did you have a rougher copy before this one? its really nice and detailed

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Bizarde
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 27, 2001 3:34 pm     Reply with quote
thank you guyz, glad to know you like it, but is really tothing wrong with it ...?
Dryfire: i made a rough sketch before, but wasnt the same poz, and low detailed.

is really nothing wrong with it ?
[i'll post the inked one when finish]

~bizarde
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steady
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 27, 2001 3:38 pm     Reply with quote
coolest pic ive seen in a long time
utterly awesome
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burn0ut
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 27, 2001 3:44 pm     Reply with quote
i think his head is alittle high compared to where his shoulder is
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Bizarde
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 27, 2001 4:16 pm     Reply with quote
Burnout:
man, don't do that, is what i love to him.
my mistake to not mention this, sorry
but, thank you

~bizarde
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 27, 2001 4:47 pm     Reply with quote
hurry up and ink it, i wanna color it

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 27, 2001 5:27 pm     Reply with quote
Oh okay bizarde
Just lookin out for ya :P
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 27, 2001 5:32 pm     Reply with quote
Everything seems to be ok. I'd like to see what you do with the background
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Bizarde
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 27, 2001 6:17 pm     Reply with quote
here is the B&W big rez:

hope is not too big

~bizarde

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 27, 2001 7:09 pm     Reply with quote
That's awesome!
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 27, 2001 9:03 pm     Reply with quote
Very Sweet, you plan on coloring it yourself?
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Bizarde
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 27, 2001 9:57 pm     Reply with quote
i work on it
but i have to go now, need some rest.


~bizarde
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 27, 2001 9:58 pm     Reply with quote
Rockin'! The details are great and it looks really functional. Can't wait to see it colored, if you are that is.

[edit]so you go and post the coloring as I'm writing my post asking for it, heh[edit]

-Flinthawk

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 27, 2001 10:44 pm     Reply with quote
Hey man that looks cool.
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 27, 2001 11:37 pm     Reply with quote
Would u mind letting me post my colored version when im done?

I dont usually color others line art, but this is damn awesome
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2001 12:18 am     Reply with quote
nice character design. i suggest inking it.

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Bizarde
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2001 12:25 am     Reply with quote
yeap, i was about to do it
thanx

~bizarde

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2001 7:41 am     Reply with quote

hoha bizarde. I think it's great. the original sketch was great. You inked it nicely and and the coloring is really cool to...-so, 3 compliments there for you

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2001 8:00 am     Reply with quote
amazingly awsome man , how old are you if u don't mind me asking ?

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2001 4:14 pm     Reply with quote
Well here i colored it, if u didnt want me to. ill take it down, just havin fun

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2001 4:41 pm     Reply with quote
all the versions are awesome great job all..
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Sergenth
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2001 6:56 pm     Reply with quote
Ah! It had a background all along!
Super!
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2001 9:47 pm     Reply with quote
Wow, that is some very solied linework as usual Bizarde. Your work has been inspiring me a lot lately !

Do you mind if I color it in and post it up when its done ?

Anyways, keep up the outstanding work

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 29, 2001 12:43 am     Reply with quote
Wow! Very cool, lines, concept and all. The pink coloring is a little...unusual, but what the heck.
The only thing i might crit are the IMO a little too big holes in the a little too thin shell of the gun muzzle. But that can do no harm to the expression of your pic.
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Bizarde
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 29, 2001 9:02 am     Reply with quote
Burnout: i don't mind
Joachim: glad you like it, thanks
v1510nAry(maaan!): i still have 28 , thanks
Jaymo: i also feel sorry for that holes, hope i'll fix it, thanks
Bournout: that's just sweeeet ! you give me good ideas, thanks
Freddio: thanks
Sergenth: hope is a good start, thanks
SephIroth: ok man, give a try. i really want to know how you ppl see him coloured. thanks

Of course everybody can try to colour it

~bizarde

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Adam Soulraider
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 29, 2001 8:20 pm     Reply with quote
I love it keep up the good work! Did you use photoshope for the coloring? It looks great!
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 29, 2001 8:34 pm     Reply with quote
Bizarde,

I saw your lineart and just had to color it up, I hope you don't mind. The combination of the figure's pose as well as the simple, yet elegant column drew me in. I have to say that this didn't turn out at all like I had originally intended. The strong line-work started me in the direction of more of a graphic style, with a really dark background and surreal colored lighting from off frame. I originally had the figure being hit primarily by a strong spotlight from above and behind - like he was turning to see who'd just turned on the lights. It looked pretty cool, but the complexity of the 'machinery' on the figure wasn't working in the 'nightmarish' lighting I'd set up (too contrasty) and the details you added were too cool to not show fully. I'd just seen a Discovery Channel show about the Greek Isles and they always seemed to show the ancient architecture at twilight for a dramatic, single-source lighting effect and thought it might be cool to carry that feeling into the color-up. So I did a quick experiment with a 'twilight' mood that would allow me to show off the details and before I knew it kinda took on a life of its own. I had no intention of getting so 'detailed' in my color up, but again, it just worked out that way. I realize that I altered your original linework substantially, but I believe I stayed true to the feel of your awesome figure.

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 29, 2001 10:32 pm     Reply with quote
hey blur, that's really nice....


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