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Hurri-cane · Posted: Thu Jan 25, 2001 10:02 am

hi all, im doing this painting and i wanted to share it, cus i havent done that in a while

and for a bigger version bigger version
give crits, suggestions, paintovers...tell me it stinks... i dont know, some feedback

.caneman

dannorthcott · junior member Member # Joined: 09 Jan 2001 Posts: 19

good stuff!!

I would suggest shortening the back - it's too long. Also, the far leg looks like it's bending upwards - cut off the bump on the top, so it's slanting down, and make the calf a little further down. Also, the foot is almost perfect, but needs to be not quite so round. It looks too spherical.

Nex · Posted: Thu Jan 25, 2001 3:08 pm

its definitely recognizeable as Hurricane-style

I like.. no crits from me sorry.

cya around (any maybe on synj's drawboard gain)

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synj · Posted: Thu Jan 25, 2001 3:52 pm

really neat. except the shadow from his hand should be much much larger on the ground since its so close to the light source.

oh hey is he checking out his crotch for spots or looking at the globe? eheeh

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WICKED · Posted: Thu Jan 25, 2001 4:50 pm

yeah the back looks weird. Also i think the foot looks kind of weird too. could be the lack of detail there. The chest looks kind of small like his pecs. every thing else looks good though. reminds me of the one you did with the ball of sadness
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el tigre · Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2001 12:20 am

Naked baby man, with glow in the dark balls! Oh to think of the years I've longed for him!

Seriously man, I like. Strangely weird yet good perspective. I have to say though, his back is fucked

The curve should start further down nearer the base of his spine. I think.

Bah! someone else explain better.

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Hurri-cane · Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2001 1:15 am

crits noted and faults adjusted.

synj: he's checking his nuts....damn how did you know ???

ill post an update, or the pic will be updated...

.caneman

toast! · Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2001 1:29 am

looks great hurricane; no crits for me

i love this pic as it is right now

toast

Hurri-cane · Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2001 4:29 am

BUMP !

i uploaded a never version of my pic...
the bigger version is better but takes alot more time

well....the brown stuff is going to end up like some sort of gene-virus....well lets just wait and see

.cenaman

Freddio · Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2001 4:36 am

I love it..

but something seems strange about the foot.. maby too rounded also could be a bit darker..

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that is fucking wicked man. i love it! good lighting.

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Dryfire · Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2001 3:52 pm

nice shades man, very nice

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WICKED · Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2001 6:10 pm

stop making pornographic pictures of yourself H =). Looks alot better with that weird shit. Can i call it shit? reminds me of those dumbasses from MTvs jackass jumping into the elephant poo.
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HardCoil · Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2001 11:51 am

Wow..really scary ! That black stuff is really unsetteling.
Do you know an artis called Mikael Kvium by chance ? Your piece really reminds me of some of his. I really like it.

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Hurri-cane · Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 12:22 am

hardcoil: nope never seen him, please post a url to his work...sounds interesting..!

thanks all for your repleys, this thread is one of the more 'popular' ive posted..13 replyes included mine..cool !

well, ill post an update soon.

.caneman

Jaymo · Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2001 8:27 am

Wow, that's weird. Very good atmosphere and lighting. Hm, don't know what to crit. Maybe the fingers could look a bit more like they had bones in them. That is, if they are supposed to...