[Beardy]

Here's a picture of cloud with a baseball bat I'm working on.

The finished pic will have a background and everything, but is there anything that looks bad on it?

[Beardy]

Your input would really be appreciated.

Here it is with a background.

[Cougar]

okee... first, loose the background
Maybe try something along the lines of a rocky cliff (very FF7, if I remember correctly). His left hand doesn't look right, in the way it's gripping the club.
And his stomache looks a bit detached from the rest.

[strata]

I'd say the eyes look wrong, the hair going out from (our) the right eye looks odd, the shoulder armor is way too small (if I remember it correctly)

and yeah, the stomach doesn't really look like it's following the same line...


but hey, what do I actually know about anything, keep working =)

[Tovart]

Its cool, i like, just loose the psycodelic background.

Also, if that is supposed to be the Nail Bat, it should have nails sticking out of it.