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ToasT 01 · Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 2:58 am

Some line work from this morning - very clean and simple ( its a client thing ) but i think it turned out cool for what it is

For some reason on screen the lines look bitty wierd ? - anyway here it is
http://www.geocities.com/inc_red/cheza.jpg

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ToasT ( the world made me the monster i am - thanks! )

[This message has been edited by ToasT 01 (edited January 12, 2001).]

sear · Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 3:38 am

hmmm

VERY good start.

i love your style man.

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sear

Bilbo · Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 2:03 pm

This is supercool

i admire your style man.. excellent lines

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Get-up Kid · Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 2:09 pm

yeah, I agree. I like the style. Are you going to color it? Post the result if you do.

EviLToYLeT · Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 4:33 pm

Great stuff. The only thing I have comments on is... I can't figure out what that guy's doing! He's a bit off balance and it doesn't look like he's leaning on the wall.... may want to fix that up but hey, it's fine as it is

The second one is the smoke on the shoe.... *puzzled look* great picture, style and hope to see more work from you

Zoso · Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 5:07 pm

Good stuff man! Definitely a unique style. I would assume old boy there is supposed to be getting his jig on?

This will look good colored for sure.

shardik · Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2001 12:44 am

see that big bulge on the side of his head?... is that the moooon? u might want to move it cus it messes up teh composition a little

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-matt

toast! · Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2001 1:45 am

nice line art toast

nice nick too hehe

AKIRA_x · Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2001 9:24 am

yes..very nice..a few issues though..

The connection betwen the two..its a perspective related probelm. He is looking straight to the left, and she is looking straight ahead..theres no connection between the two, to explaing the hearts. One or both should look at the other. The other thing is the level of the ground. Are the both standing on the same level? Cause that would make here a veeeery short person. Her body sugest she is standing straight up and leaning her arms on the brick wall...this sugests that the ground is somwhere outside the image. But the ground of the guy is visible and not far down at all. Either she should be MUCH higher up, or leaning down, which would give us a nice cleaveage shot, and maybe a notion of her hip.

Keep ut the good work.

AKIRA

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Whos ya dady!!

ToasT 01 · Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2001 11:02 pm

Thanks for all the hints and kind words - as far as the perspective thing, when its colored it will all make sense - Honest

Ben_kas · Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2001 3:15 pm

sacrelicious · Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2001 8:45 pm

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Weaseling out of things is what separates us from the animals... except the weasel.

Dives · Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2001 2:55 am

that pic really has attitude man

Freddio · Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2001 3:59 am

Dammm Coool man..

dude you gotta get out of Johannesburg..

thats one scary place to live