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Horg junior member
Member # Joined: 12 Jan 2001 Posts: 47 Location: Montr�al, QC, Canada
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 4:33 am |
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Hello there everyone,
Yup I'm a "newbie" (do I hate this term) too, and as most newbies in this forum I have been looking around without making noise for a couple weeks. My turn now to show my digistuff ! So here it is, some kind of Heavy Weapon Alien lost in a marsh of some sort. Designed that guy some years ago but decided to colour it at 5 am this morning, took me about an hour. Not finished of course, colors are strange and a bit too dark. Waiting for comments ! Thanks
[This message has been edited by Horg (edited January 12, 2001).] |
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ToasT 01 member
Member # Joined: 03 Jan 2001 Posts: 74 Location: Johannesburg - South Africa
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 5:17 am |
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nice start - the coloring is a bit smudged and i think you need a specific light source ( just my thoughts - use it dont use it )
* post it when its done curiouse to see what kinda alien thang it is *
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ToasT ( the world made me the monster i am - thanks! ) |
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feebsaint member
Member # Joined: 09 Jan 2001 Posts: 353 Location: West Valley City, Utah, USA
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 6:19 am |
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I liked the mood right off. Reminded me of the dark moods of two of my own pieces:
Keep us updated on that fella of yours. Punch out a face for us, k? And don't forget some subtle backlighting.
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"I Draw Stuff" |
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Al_kgs member
Member # Joined: 10 Jan 2001 Posts: 82 Location: Nantes, France
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 6:21 am |
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Come on, go on with this...
With his stance kind of frozen in midair and the blue-greenish tones, I thought it could make a quite good underwater scene. Add one or two bubbles, a slight distorsion and here it comes! Just a thought, take it or leave it... |
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ZenDrag0n member
Member # Joined: 31 Dec 2000 Posts: 119 Location: Olympia, WA, USA
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 9:46 am |
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Hope that guy doesn't suffocate with that plastic bag over his head. (har har har very pathetic joke)
I like what you have already. One crit I'll mention: the arm on the right side of the picture, well I know it's an alien, but judging from the muscles on the other arm, the bicept is misplaced for the angle of the forarm; it would be angled towards the body more.
Post more as it comes along. |
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Al_kgs member
Member # Joined: 10 Jan 2001 Posts: 82 Location: Nantes, France
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 9:59 am |
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Hey feebsaint, cool pics... the second reminds me of Segur (my favorite french artist). The slim, triangular-shaped head creature looks like a dark-gobelin from 'legendes des contr�es oubli�es'. I sur love it |
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-- Transcendent -- member
Member # Joined: 12 Nov 2000 Posts: 251 Location: Somewhere, Sometime, Somehow
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 10:30 am |
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The title of this message still eludes me. New face ? Where's the face ? Hmmm ... *just kidding*
There's something about the perspective and scale which bothers me - his shoulder looks enlarged, and so does his wrist. Just something you might want to take note of.
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El Caseron member
Member # Joined: 31 Mar 2000 Posts: 254 Location: Germany near Hamburg
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 1:42 pm |
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Is that gollum on the first pic? Feebsaint? |
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Horg junior member
Member # Joined: 12 Jan 2001 Posts: 47 Location: Montr�al, QC, Canada
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 1:57 pm |
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Thanks for the comments everyone. Here's the original drawing I did 2 years ago. The shoulder is ententionally made bigger, like a big armored one. I'll continue to work on it as soon as I have time !
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Horg junior member
Member # Joined: 12 Jan 2001 Posts: 47 Location: Montr�al, QC, Canada
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 5:16 pm |
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Here's a new version. I changed the colors a little and added a backlight (maybe it's too intense). His head is so so. Anyway, enjoy !
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Al_kgs member
Member # Joined: 10 Jan 2001 Posts: 82 Location: Nantes, France
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2001 5:30 pm |
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The head is definitely better looking now than plain blue!
The backlight is not really too intense but i think you spreaded it a bit too much all over the place. Make it more subtle.
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Awetopsy member
Member # Joined: 04 Oct 2000 Posts: 3028 Location: Kelowna
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Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2001 10:24 am |
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I agree the backlight could be abit more subtle...
but i really like how this peice is turning out..
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Horg junior member
Member # Joined: 12 Jan 2001 Posts: 47 Location: Montr�al, QC, Canada
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Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2001 2:25 pm |
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Here is a new version. What do you think ?
Sorry for fuzzyness, compression is a bitch
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Simon Gustafsson member
Member # Joined: 04 Jun 2000 Posts: 249 Location: London, UK
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lildragon member
Member # Joined: 14 Jan 2001 Posts: 62 Location: Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
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Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2001 4:45 am |
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This is pretty cool I can feel the dampness in the air also what did you use to color? |
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Horg junior member
Member # Joined: 12 Jan 2001 Posts: 47 Location: Montr�al, QC, Canada
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Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2001 4:56 pm |
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Thanks for the comments !
lildragon, to answer your question, this was colored on Photoshop using my old Wacom tablet (like most people in here I guess) |
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