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burn0ut
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 Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2001 9:16 pm |
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does the perspective look alright? anyways hope you all think its coming out okay, if you know of ways to make it better dont be shy to gimme some suggestions 
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Blakk
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| Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2001 10:53 pm |
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Yo! I went out with my cousin on our lunch brake today and we be haven Burger King chicken sandwiches Yo!
Yo! That shit is nasty yo I just stick to KFC fo next time. Yo it's mo better yo! |
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burn0ut
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| Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2001 11:41 pm |
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| uh huh...... |
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Bradford
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| Posted: Mon Jan 15, 2001 12:14 am |
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*cough* there is a name for people like blakk. but anyways..
nice picture, i like the perspective a lot, you don't find many pictures like it. the jawbone looks a little off. perhaps you could angle is back a little more with the rest of perspective you have going. i could be wrong too, but take it into consideration.
i think a cool background would look nice, in the same perspective as you have him at, of course.
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burn0ut
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| Posted: Mon Jan 15, 2001 12:21 am |
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Yea man, the perspective on the whole face looks off to me, but its real hard for me to get it looking right :/
and yea, im goina do some kinda background on it aswell yes same perspective (or as close as i can get it ) |
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silber
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| Posted: Mon Jan 15, 2001 8:00 am |
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first I thought you see the pic with the eyes
of an insect but now I think one should see it with the eyes of a person who is on his knees
maybe I'm totally off but I think in both cases there have to be much more chin and neck-just an extremer downside view of the head
makes that sense?
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Ben Barker
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| Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2001 11:42 am |
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| You should move the horizon way down. |
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S4Sb
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| Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2001 1:52 pm |
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/me likes! But I'm not sure bout the bended legs... sorry, but it looks like the character is looking for a toilet
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burn0ut
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| Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2001 1:52 pm |
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| ah okay, that was just a last minute thing anyway, im not goina work on this crap anymore :/ |
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