[Irulann]

Just a new sketch for a future painting-I think it looks ok'ish right now, but it needs a HUGE amount of work before it's even a workable sketch--just kinda felt like posting to see what everyone thought--thanks in advance for crits

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All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream.
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I Imagined an Image
My Image Imagined Me
and I became It's puppet
just a Child of It's Imagery

[This message has been edited by Irulann (edited January 12, 2001).]

[Al_kgs]

It's a bit strange the way the path is going away and up... Maybe it shouldn't go that far up in the picture, it seems as if it was seen from above whereas the woman is not. u see what i mean?

And for a bathing related picture, maybe you could focus more on the water than the vegetation surrounding with cool effects of reflexion and stuffs...

Anyway the starting material is interesting

[Freddio]

dont spoil it by showing us the bas sketch

[Irulann]

sorry guys

back to the 'ol drawing board-just as an updae, it's coming along much better now...thanks