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Bradford Guest
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Posted: Thu Jan 04, 2001 2:42 am |
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this was done in about 20 minutes or so. i am looking for major critiques from anyone. i know there are a lot of problems.
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MeatyCheesyBoy member
Member # Joined: 02 Dec 2000 Posts: 139 Location: Everett, WA USA
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Posted: Thu Jan 04, 2001 7:59 am |
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This may have been intentional but damn man, his forearms are huge. With forearms that big, you wonder how much the guy masturbates every day
I kind of like the smallish head (Don't know if it was intentional, to enhance the arm size but I kind of like it).
The other thing (which I am trying to work on), is that you should try to not draw everything from a perfect front or profile view, especially faces. It really detracts, in my opinion, from the overall image because drawing a face from front or profile is fairly elementary, and doesn't really show much in the way of skills.
Also, (I could be wrong on this one), his ear seems a little low.
But all in all, I enjoyed it. |
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Posted: Thu Jan 04, 2001 10:25 am |
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thanks for the reply. i can see what you mean by the arms. i need to draw them smaller damn. your right about the face angle and ears too. hmm more practice ahoy.
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EviLToYLeT member
Member # Joined: 09 Aug 2000 Posts: 1216 Location: CA, USA
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Posted: Thu Jan 04, 2001 10:54 pm |
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The arms are indeed too big. But.. looks pretty cool. If you want big arms to make him look well-builty and super buff, make sure to beef up his body and neck as well to keep everything in porportion. Otherwise just tone down the arms a tad bit. |
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Member # Joined: 28 Nov 2000 Posts: 115
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Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2001 12:14 am |
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I wont even ask what the firing mechanism is for that handgun ![](http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/smile.gif) |
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