[EviLToYLeT]

Haha. Ok just posted this over in that gas mask thread. I think i got this art thing down . Anyway, I was looking at this image and ... i know it looks a bit wierd. Any suggestions you guys could give on it and maybe some things I should think about next time I paint ? Much thanks in advance, really appreciate it.

[Bubonic]

well, i really like the coloring job you did, its not all smooth and fine.. but a bit more rough and sketchy which kinda suits the mood of the pic.. anyway..

i like the job you did on the dashes of blue throughout the pic..

it looks to skinny though. the mask and lenses area should be more round and not so oval.. and the symetry of the oxygen things are off. they look bent and crooked..

work on it.. make it more wider and more straight and it will look a lot better..

if you do, make sure to repost. i wanna see it!

[EviLToYLeT]

Sorry......but I'm just bumping this post back up. I really need help.. I'm eager to learn but can't find anyone to teach. *arghhh*

[Freddio]

gotta have a better light source..

have a look at the other pics and try to emulate their good points ...

see how they have their light sources