[billyjay]

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I know they are only pencil concept drawings but I wondered if anyone had any crits or further ideas for either drawings. Both are larger in real life. The Lym was my complete imagination, while Gelorr, is my creation it is a spin off something I "think" I saw on Alan Tew's Beeba.net, but I'm not sure.

Plus, I would love to get any ideas in case I do a painting or a large colored peice with either of these characters, any ideas or critizism for that would help tons.

Either way they are both created for a story I had, check out my website for more details. Also check out my website for the third page in my interactive comic book called, Smushbowl.
http://www.tbns.net/billyjay/test2.html

Also do not forget to write on my message board, so I know who of my Sijun heroes have actually looked at my website. Thanks guys! Looking foward to your comments.

[MD-02-Geist]

I like your pictures ... especially the second one. But in the closer look of the wizard and the creature the wiz has got too short legs ... the proportions are not perfect.
But when u see the pictures it doesn't count much, because they are great.
Keep this work on ... great stuff.

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[billyjay]

MD-02-Geist

Thanks for the comments. I see what you mean about the wizards leg size. That should be easily fixed. Do you think the right foot would be visable at all at that angle?

Thanks again!
BJ

[Flexible Elf]

hehe LA-Z-Demon

Cool pics.

-Flexible Elf

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