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Jenn
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I was reading through some of my old poetry and thinking about how I used to feel.. This image isnt finnished yet as i was couldnt find the font I wanted.. Any comments so far would be apreciated... I will post the finnished one here when i get it done.
I hope you all have a fabulous Christmas and look forward to seeing you all back in the new year. Best wishes and all.
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faustgfx
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| Posted: Sun Dec 24, 2000 3:17 am |
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[what i said on icq]
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sky high with a heartache of stone you never see me 'cos i'm always alone
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Jenn
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| Posted: Sun Dec 24, 2000 3:51 am |
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Still not finnished.. Getting there tho..
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faustgfx
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| Posted: Sun Dec 24, 2000 3:53 am |
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's starting to look like something, keep going at it.
(keep it abstract, don't make it look too much like something.)
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| Posted: Sun Dec 24, 2000 3:59 am |
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It's too saturated, methinks. With a more modest (cold) color palette you would make the black part look much more black and large.
Geh. what do i know. it's 1pm and i have an olympic hangover.
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| Posted: Sun Dec 24, 2000 6:32 am |
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Spitfire
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| Posted: Sun Dec 24, 2000 7:26 am |
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Watch it buddy, that's my line 
Did i mention it needs skulls? baby skulls preferrably. And something like cursive typography saying something like "Under the protection of Angels with broken wings i contemplate the endless sorrow that is life on this godless planet of consumerism and hate".
Not that a simple all caps "FUCK" wont do...
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[Shizo]
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| Posted: Sun Dec 24, 2000 7:39 am |
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hhehhahah! What are you TALKING about peoples?!!
Ahh you on drugs
/me runs
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Anthony
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| Posted: Sun Dec 24, 2000 9:24 am |
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I think you're confident enough for me to say this to you Jenn: What the hell is that, and does it have something to do with art? Looks like a texture for a 3d model with a bunch of black crap on it to me. Don't take me too seriously..
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TheMilkMan
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| Posted: Sun Dec 24, 2000 9:28 am |
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Why would you post that? It looks like you tooka picture of dirty burnt metal....just my opnion
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Ahcri
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| Posted: Sun Dec 24, 2000 9:50 am |
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Well it doesn't look like rusty burnt metal to me.. I agree that you should keep it abstract, make people guess what it is, like in the second image I can sort of see something, but yet I think you have no intention to make it something, right? It's very cool. 
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Ahcri
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| Posted: Sun Dec 24, 2000 9:51 am |
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Why is people so harsh on this piece??
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heard that people with issues or problems in their lives that constantly complain grow more in depression and will eventually grow more angry towards little things in life that don't matter at all." --The "Wise" Man on the P.O.V. |
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el tigre
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| Posted: Sun Dec 24, 2000 9:56 am |
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Jenn, I can totally see a dinosaur looking inquisitivley(sp) at me... Cool!
or is that just me?
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arse, my pen just ran out. *shakes furiously*
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Capt.FlushGarden
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| Posted: Sun Dec 24, 2000 1:56 pm |
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| Yes! I can se the dinosaur too, it looks kinda curious and happy, it's a friendly dinosaur, or maybe it just looks friendly, maybe it wants to eat me alive! |
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| Posted: Sun Dec 24, 2000 2:49 pm |
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| Jenn: a picture of you naked? |
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[Shizo]
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| Posted: Sun Dec 24, 2000 3:06 pm |
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You totaly failed at making it abstract! I can clearly see a three nuclear missiles flying directly at me... CLEARLY! So HA!
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Anthony
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| Posted: Sun Dec 24, 2000 6:57 pm |
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Ahcri: I dunno 'bout the others, but I just like giving people a hard time.
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Jenn
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| Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2000 4:36 am |
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Hahahh thanks peeps..
anthony... at least you know you arent nice... thanks for the crit tho.... and no this doesnt mean i like or dislike you
Its not ment to be much other than a mess which yeh.. was reflected jin my poem..
ANyways... Back to christmas
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Nex
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| Posted: Mon Dec 25, 2000 2:35 pm |
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like the 1st one.
Maybe you need some focal point in there.. on the other hand.. I did not read the poems you read so I got no idea.
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