[odashi]

here is my latest and greatest pic, took me a while to figure out how to incorporate the background. i need lots of consturctive crit. please.
whoops. i was rushing to work while posting it.
here it be


[This message has been edited by odashi (edited December 22, 2000).]

[Hurri-cane]

and the pic ?

[sock]

constructive crit...
...hmm
maybe post the image? )))
or is it just me, who can't see a pic there, hehe

[edit]: well, it wasn't just me *puuuh*

[This message has been edited by sock (edited December 22, 2000).]

[Bare Bonez]

I think it's one of those abstract pictures. It's more of a mental visualization than a physical visualization. Can you see it? Picture "Robot in the woods". Such beauty and movement of color. The dynamic positioning and the emotional gleem in the robot's eyes.

Wow! This is beyond words.


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[AlieN]

I like the juxtaposition between the natural and the supernatural.

it reminds me of "Princess Mononoke" in that respect

[jHof]

Needs more plade.

-Hof

[odashi]

fixed it, i was in a rush to leave, late for work, not good. well its there now

[odashi]

please sombody comment (ack) need comments (weeze) critisizm anything (ugghhghh)

[Ben Barker]

I like the warped perspective, but I think you would see the underside of the trees more. As it stands now, the trees need to point more towards the sky at their base. Save the leaning over for the tops of the trees, especially the center most tree, which is the most confusing.
Add more trees behind what is currently there, receding off into the distance.
Make the moon less, or equally as intense as the eye.
It's a nice pic. I must say I like your stuff so far alot. It has all shown you have a great potential.

[Zoso]

Great pic! The perspective really catches your eye, and that robot is pretty cool too.

I agree with Ben, showing the undersides of the trees branches would help as well.

[nightmare]

this isn't constructive, but the pic reminds me a little of patlabor's beginning sequence where the red robot is going berserk in the woods.
woot!

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[Zoso]

Dang nightmare, you're right. Patlabor .. ahhh. Now THAT was cool!

[Loukus]

Perhaps I bit more hard light on the dude's helmet and the trees from the moon is in order. ... I dunno if you should though, I really like hard light so I'm a partial source.

Joel Loukus

[odashi]

wow, thanks for all the comments and crits! i can see how it kinda looks like patlabor and princess mononoke, cool. ill post the newer version as soon as my site lets me upload (stupid ftp server)