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Brue
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 23, 2000 10:03 pm     Reply with quote
I did this with pencil crayon and then digitaly fixed it up a bit. I didnt do any erasing because of the pencil crayon. Including everything i think it took about 1 and a half hours. I cant figure out how to do the hair so it is all over the place and rather dull. I also attempted to make it more interesting by adding a hand in there. almost as if it were touchin the screen. It didnt turn out so i got rid of it, leaving the pic kind of boring lookin. Maybe one of you could help on that. Anyway.. there is a better copy at the bottom
Crits are well welcomed.
Enjoy!


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PostPosted: Sat Dec 23, 2000 10:36 pm     Reply with quote
brue, just because you're the sister of Isric and donk is why i'm replying so don't get your hopes up j/k

the pic is cool, it definately shows me that it only takes a few different(obvious and very major) things to separate a womans face from a man's, which is a problem i had way back in the beginning of this forum.

well, i really can't help you with the pic that much, but i'm just here to encourage you to keep up the good work. a little couple few things i could point out is, either her face or her nose is a little long(i think it's the nose), and the hairline could use a tad of work.

Merry Christmas!!!!

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`~*Silico
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 23, 2000 10:55 pm     Reply with quote
I realize i only have one comment but i thought i would show you this. I havent touched it up on the comp at all but i did add some definate lines here and there with a permanent marker.
Maybe it looks better this way, well i think the hair does anyway


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PostPosted: Sun Dec 24, 2000 12:35 am     Reply with quote
Brue-

Pretty good. I think if you add some more shadow to the cheekbones, chin and nose it will help define the face. Hair does look better the second time around - believe me I know it can be a pain to do hair. That's why I draw bald people and machines ... no hair!

Anyways, I like what you have hear. If you want I can point you towards some good tutorials for drawing womens faces and hair.

Cheers!
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 24, 2000 8:24 am     Reply with quote
Thanx for the comments so far. I would love to know where those tutorials are, it might help my skills. Anymore comments/crits?

Merry Christmas
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 24, 2000 4:14 pm     Reply with quote
Brue-

Check out Polykarbon- there are some good tutorials there on hair, facial details and the like. It all has a definite anime lean to it, but it does help quite a bit. The techniques can be applied within any style.

Cheers, and merry christmas!

*edit* late night bleary eyed typos

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