[WICKED]

[This message has been edited by WICKED (edited December 22, 2000).]

[bitz]

I don't quite get the second picture, or at least, those little images on the sides.

Anyways, the light coming down should be alot more of a gradient, not those squiggly lines that you have. Also, since it's such a bright lightsource and coming from a single point, you're going to have alot more darker shadows on that guy. Add some more contrast to him.

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bitz

[WICKED]

sorry i forgot to upload the one without the line art.

[WICKED]

well thanks blitz for being the onlyone to respond. I also switch the picture.
WICKED

[Ampa]

Both these pictures suffer from the same problem... they are too flat, and lack subtlty. You need to practice depth in your images. I would suggest doing some studies of things such as light and shadow to learn about relief, and some geometric / perspective studies too.

May be they aren't as fun as making picture but your art will improve 100%.

Ampa.

[WICKED]

Ampa whats subtlty? I keepted getting to add darker shades to the head, but when i did i would add the light and the shades would lighten up.

the beach sceene looks pretty bad but its my first time.