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M Cuevas · Posted: Sat Dec 23, 2000 6:43 am

did this work?
http://djcue.fws1.com/images/russian_boxer.jpg

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Rinaldo · Posted: Sat Dec 23, 2000 6:48 am

sorry no, you would be better off posting all your tries in the one thread to avoid flooding the place with duds. just have the one thread and edit the first post till you get it right

happens to everyone

Rinaldo · Posted: Sat Dec 23, 2000 6:50 am

link gets

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M Cuevas · Posted: Sat Dec 23, 2000 6:54 am

Thanks for the advice.

Try this
http://djcue.fws1.com/photo.html

Please pardon the cheesey "instant web" design. I'll get something more legit soon.

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Rinaldo · Posted: Sat Dec 23, 2000 7:14 am

hehe now it works, I love Toriyama

. your char sketch rocks as well.

a couple os crits on your colouring- I would add some shaddows. as it stands things are looking rather flat (I'm thinking of the Toriyama colouring, as if it just sorta colouring between the lines as opposed to really bringing out the form. might be what you want but I thing there are a lot of places that could do with some shaddow.
the metal on the bike is also not quite working.
the red light on Goku's face is only a change in hue and not in value. it's no lighter than the skin when converted to greyscale, and it sort of looks like he's got lipstick all over his face

(for serious lack of another way of explaining it) *sorry* it's late here.

sorry if I'm giving you harsh comments here, automatic I suppose

I realy like the line work on the second one.

Ragnarok · Posted: Sat Dec 23, 2000 7:14 am

I'm downloading the images with massdownloadere. You should compress the images before posting, they are too big.
Did you draw the boxer or you only coloured it?

Ragnarok · Posted: Sat Dec 23, 2000 7:18 am

I finished the download

. Both pictures look very good, but I think you should try what Rinaldo says.

M Cuevas · Posted: Sat Dec 23, 2000 7:18 am

quote:
Originally posted by Ragnarok:
I'm downloading the images with massdownloadere. You should compress the images before posting, they are too big.
Did you draw the boxer or you only coloured it?

Hey thanks for the crits! The boxer I drew myself.

As for the Toriyama pic (at the risk of sounding defensive) I did it as sort of an excercise to show off my new tablet to my niece. Your right about the lipstick light on the face which was supposed to resemble radiosity from the bike.

oh well. I'll be putting more stuff up soon.

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