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kimzoll · Posted: Wed Dec 20, 2000 5:28 am

Hey all,
Ive been reading these Warhammer40000 Gaunts Ghosts novels, they are some of the best written books, Ive read for a long time, I really get inspired by books when I draw, well this drawing is semi inspired by the atmosphere in those books.
Ive put it into a layout i might use as my future portfoliofrontpage.
Kim

bitz · Posted: Wed Dec 20, 2000 11:59 am

Aaah! Those books do rule

There are probably alot of scenes in those books that could inspire some art.

Anyways, critique.. uhm, I can't really make out what sort of face the purple guy has ( that may just me being blind ). His torso looks a bit wide under the arm that's up in the air, doesn't seem like it would go that far up under his arm, but then again, it's an alien.

As for the kneeling guy, I like him alot better, only thing I saw with him is the knee that's not on the ground should be pointed more towards the viewer, he looks too off balance.

keep up the good work.

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bitz

bitz · Posted: Wed Dec 20, 2000 2:49 pm

me? steal? bah!

it's mine! dabnammit! you're the the thief!

<grumbles>

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bitz

Blitz · Posted: Thu Dec 21, 2000 12:22 am

Ok
Who is the kid up there trying to take my name

I like those. Especialy the guy in the pink/purple suit. Great character

Blitz

kimzoll · Posted: Thu Dec 21, 2000 1:43 am

bitz: yes it vey good books right now Im reading "Necropolis".
I can follow you on the right arm crit, if his right shoulder where abit higher, it would look better.

Blitz: thnx.

Kim