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masticator
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 19, 2000 11:17 am     Reply with quote
ok, here is my third picture, the pigman.


could someone help me with the metal thing on the helmet and on his left shoulder? i just cant get it look right.
thanks.

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bitz
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 19, 2000 2:28 pm     Reply with quote
looks nice so far, only thing i noticed is that the teeth seem a bit undefined.

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 19, 2000 4:01 pm     Reply with quote
Very porcine.

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 19, 2000 8:42 pm     Reply with quote
It looks like a Tolkien troll
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 20, 2000 12:46 am     Reply with quote
It looks great!
I think what you need to do with the shoulder thing is add some more reflection.. right now it looks a bit flat. Other than that, all you need is general refinement I think..

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PostPosted: Wed Dec 20, 2000 12:48 am     Reply with quote
very nice job on the overall pic, and i can see you spent a lot of time doing the hairs on face and everywhere else.. Good use of light and darks to dfine the facial shape..

There seems to be lil strands on hair on the helmet itself on the top.. should that be there? and you should work on the transition from light to dark on the helmet..

Overall really good job can't wait to see it finished..
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masticator
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 20, 2000 10:26 am     Reply with quote
hey, thanks a bunch.
yeah i know it needs some touch up.
thanks for the metal advice kegie, i will try this.
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 20, 2000 10:29 am     Reply with quote
Nice shadows! He looks a bit too fuzzy though


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PostPosted: Wed Dec 20, 2000 11:09 am     Reply with quote
i just cant get it, could someone help me with that metal thingy and just roughly paint it for me? please. thx
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