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masticator junior member
Member # Joined: 17 Dec 2000 Posts: 47 Location: the crypt
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Posted: Tue Dec 19, 2000 11:17 am |
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ok, here is my third picture, the pigman.
could someone help me with the metal thing on the helmet and on his left shoulder? i just cant get it look right.
thanks.
[This message has been edited by masticator (edited December 19, 2000).] |
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bitz junior member
Member # Joined: 27 Nov 2000 Posts: 45 Location: CA, US
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Posted: Tue Dec 19, 2000 2:28 pm |
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looks nice so far, only thing i noticed is that the teeth seem a bit undefined.
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A.Buttle member
Member # Joined: 20 Mar 2000 Posts: 1724
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FFNeX member
Member # Joined: 15 Dec 2000 Posts: 133 Location: Miami, FL, USA
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Posted: Tue Dec 19, 2000 8:42 pm |
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It looks like a Tolkien troll |
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kegie junior member
Member # Joined: 12 Dec 2000 Posts: 26 Location: sweden
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Posted: Wed Dec 20, 2000 12:46 am |
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It looks great!
I think what you need to do with the shoulder thing is add some more reflection.. right now it looks a bit flat. Other than that, all you need is general refinement I think..
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Nihil curo de ista tua stulta superstitione. |
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Bubonic member
Member # Joined: 21 Sep 2000 Posts: 209 Location: Long Island, NY, US
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Posted: Wed Dec 20, 2000 12:48 am |
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very nice job on the overall pic, and i can see you spent a lot of time doing the hairs on face and everywhere else.. Good use of light and darks to dfine the facial shape..
There seems to be lil strands on hair on the helmet itself on the top.. should that be there? and you should work on the transition from light to dark on the helmet..
Overall really good job can't wait to see it finished.. |
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masticator junior member
Member # Joined: 17 Dec 2000 Posts: 47 Location: the crypt
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Posted: Wed Dec 20, 2000 10:26 am |
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hey, thanks a bunch.
yeah i know it needs some touch up.
thanks for the metal advice kegie, i will try this. |
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Superbug member
Member # Joined: 12 Jul 2000 Posts: 544 Location: Canada
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Posted: Wed Dec 20, 2000 10:29 am |
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Nice shadows! He looks a bit too fuzzy though
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masticator junior member
Member # Joined: 17 Dec 2000 Posts: 47 Location: the crypt
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Posted: Wed Dec 20, 2000 11:09 am |
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i just cant get it, could someone help me with that metal thingy and just roughly paint it for me? please. thx |
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