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nova member
Member # Joined: 23 Oct 1999 Posts: 751 Location: seattle, wa
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Posted: Sun Dec 17, 2000 3:51 pm |
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Alo,
I devoted myself to producing some kind of drawing 2 days ago, our first snow day (yahoo!). Here's the product of that slight insanity:
She's part of a group of teenagers from an RPG i'm making for my senior project. I have no name for her yet. And uh, if a colored version surfaces, i'll post it.
So if anybody could provide me with any critiques or ideas, that'd be great
[edit: sorry about that, Skeez, here ya go]
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*nova
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[This message has been edited by Nova (edited December 17, 2000).] |
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Skeezer member
Member # Joined: 12 Oct 2000 Posts: 348 Location: Lake Stevens, Wa, USA
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Posted: Sun Dec 17, 2000 3:58 pm |
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Hello Nova, I can't see your pic. Plz. fix.  |
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nightmare member
Member # Joined: 04 Aug 2000 Posts: 269 Location: calgary, alberta, canada
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Posted: Sun Dec 17, 2000 4:20 pm |
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yay new picture! i think its great as b+w, doesn't need coloring but coloring is always fun. the only thing i find kinda weird is that foot on the right, looks short but thats just me. that, and she has quite a forehead.
i like it though, don't forget to show off the colored version!
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Slicer member
Member # Joined: 03 Mar 2000 Posts: 187 Location: Sala, Sweden
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Posted: Sun Dec 17, 2000 4:25 pm |
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damn. really good sketch. Now then there is some problems I think. I think here neck seems to be a bit skinny and the head feels kinda small compared to the rest of the body.
And I think the knees are a bit to high.
And maybe the left boot is a bit to big compared to the left one.
looks very good other than that...I could just kiss her =)
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Lukias Guest
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Posted: Sun Dec 17, 2000 4:50 pm |
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Hey Nova - Nice style and linework, I wanna see more. I can't rememer your other stuff....so I'm off to your homepage!. |
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Bradford Guest
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Posted: Tue Dec 19, 2000 10:53 pm |
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Hey, nice pencil work. It looks very complete.
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Dhabih Administrator
Member # Joined: 13 Sep 1999 Posts: 532 Location: Kirkland, WA, U.S.A.
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Posted: Wed Dec 20, 2000 3:56 am |
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Nice! I really think every pic your doing is getting better and better. Heard about your senior project from someone else. Good luck with that! |
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