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A · Posted: Tue Dec 19, 2000 12:33 am

Oh well, still stuck on the "girls with assault weapons" theme....

..but that's OK, eh?

Cheers, A.

Bradford · Guest Member #

Very nice picture I must say. The only thing that bugs me is that shodow on her face, it doesn't look right. But it's as if she painted the right side of her face cyan. Or did she? -Nice peice overall.

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Jaymo · Posted: Tue Dec 19, 2000 1:31 am

Nice one, especially the gun.

Two things though: Like bradford mentioned the sudden change of color in her face doesn't seem right. But I think it's more the saturated brown. The scene features some sort of night-light, so the color should be more desaturated unless you add another lightsource. The other thing is the arm holding the gun. It appears a little too long, IMO.

cybergod · Posted: Tue Dec 19, 2000 4:05 am

i love tough girls

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OkkE · Posted: Tue Dec 19, 2000 7:01 am

i see a red X?

Infinity · Posted: Tue Dec 19, 2000 9:24 am

I like the girls... and I like the guns, so keep on that theme

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El Caseron · Posted: Tue Dec 19, 2000 10:32 am

Great! Keep it up. Besides the things already mentioned I can't see a thing.

black_fish · Posted: Tue Dec 19, 2000 11:03 am

Beautiful A! I really dig your style. Your coloring is extremely nice, and you have a good lineart. Very solid, very stylish. I'm not sure about her face though, but that's a little detail.

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EviLToYLeT · Posted: Tue Dec 19, 2000 10:47 pm

Nice. Very nice. The left side of the face..... heh yah that area is a bit wierd. It's more of a purplish than a dark purple hue. Guess it was really dark while you were shading eh?

Anyway, the little ripped fabric on the leg seems to have the skin as part of it. You kind of have to make the fabric look a bit thicker. Also, I'm assuming that since the fabric ripped, she would have some kind of injury. Last but not least, her icy breath is bothering me. It just doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the picture. Anyway, Really like the shot. And nice background combo with girl

Jezebel · Posted: Wed Dec 20, 2000 12:59 am

I REALLY like this! However, like everyone has said, there is just something about the girls face that isn't right. But to me it's more than the color, it's almost as though her face is a different style than the rest of the pic, it's a little too soft.

I also believe that if you were to take her eyes off the viewer, your picture would be MUCH more interesting. I think that overall when a character is looking off as though the viewer doesn't exist, it tells more of a story and says more about the character.

Nice nice drawing

-Beth

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