Sijun Forums :: View topic - Tentacles! Blood! Voilence! Penetration! Monsters!

Codax · Posted: Tue Dec 19, 2000 7:30 am

These are the things you will /not/ find in this picture...and possibly any of my pictures! So Hahahahahahahaha, I'm still working on my Manga and here is a CG of the 3 main female Characters. This CG was done in collaboration with CoffeeSketch who supplied the wonderful sketch.

Small Version:

Big Version: http://www.pages.drexel.edu/~man27/images/3raigirlsBIG.jpg

Please Comment and Critique on this piece, I worked really hard on it.

Codax
Staying up Late is easy, getting up early is hard

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cybergod · Posted: Tue Dec 19, 2000 7:32 am

pokemon girls?

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Chapel · member Member # Joined: 18 Mar 2000 Posts: 1930

Read Dhabih's statement http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/Forum2/HTML/006616.html

hennifer · Posted: Tue Dec 19, 2000 7:44 am

hey, i think you should ink the sketch as well as coloring it. right now the lines are too sketchy to do the drawing justice. the characters look really good, altho the crouching one looked more like a guy to me at first.

also, i think it would look better with a drawn/painted background, even if that drawing/painting is just an abstract kind of thing.

chapel: this topic name is in response to codax's last post, where s/he asked 'is this too cutesy?' and everyone said 'yes, you need more monsters, blood, violence, tentacle rape, etc.' kind of funny if you ask me.

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Chapel · member Member # Joined: 18 Mar 2000 Posts: 1930

hennifer: I know... and I clicked on this thread expecting to see those things. I hate false advertisement.

A.Buttle · member Member # Joined: 20 Mar 2000 Posts: 1724

The drawing is much better this time, but the overalls just look sloppy. It also looks like you'r using the dodge/burn tool for primary shading. Try to avoid that. Add more reflection on the floor.

Your rendering of a hallway is amazing!

More tentacles.

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Bishop_Six · Posted: Tue Dec 19, 2000 2:43 pm

I'm sorry, but anime(or manga or whatever the heck you call it) just doesn't do it for me. I'm not knocking your pic, it's just not my style.

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A.Buttle · member Member # Joined: 20 Mar 2000 Posts: 1724

Then why the hell are you posting, Bishop-Six?

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Bishop_Six · Posted: Tue Dec 19, 2000 3:01 pm

"Please comment and critique on this piece", is what Codax said. If he wasnt' serious about it, he shouldn't have said it. Just a piece of my mind.

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Redbeard · Posted: Tue Dec 19, 2000 3:48 pm

Yeah, my first thought was, didn't Dhab specifically say NOT to do that? But, as it's in relation to a previous threads comments, I suppose I can overlook it...

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Originally posted by cybergod:
pokemon girls?

I believe that's Pokegals - Gotta F*** 'Em All. I'm not too keen on that idea though... Allergic to fur... :-)

kardis · Posted: Wed Dec 20, 2000 12:50 am

haha weird stuff.. reminds of furry-styled anime.. anyhoo, the two gals look okay and disturbed (just look at their feet!!) i thought they were just gals wearin hats and a fake tail, now this?? they're half-pikachu-half-man...

the color job seems okay, but could use improvement. i dislike the guy's jean.. need a fix

how? ask someone that knows art heh

-kardis