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Delucubus · Posted: Sun Dec 17, 2000 5:52 pm

Hey everyone, new picture i'm working on. I posted the original sketch and then what i've done in PS so far. Please crit, especially on the shading. The background she's going to be in is a barn kind of thing with window light coming from the right lighting her up.

Should i make it more contrasting?
Are her arms too short?
Anything else?
Thanks

Dryfire · Posted: Sun Dec 17, 2000 5:57 pm

head is too big, and i think her legs are out of proportion too! use that eraser!

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Guy · Posted: Sun Dec 17, 2000 7:12 pm

ummm.. dryfire. its a cartoonish character. its ok to have it unproporsional!

i think its alright delucubus. my only problem is how her legs meet eachother.. its like she has no.. crotch hehe and the shading is a little odd. but thats not that hard to fix up

Wayco · junior member Member # Joined: 26 Aug 2000 Posts: 9

hmm.. yeah, i agree that the head is too large, but it is a cartoon so it's alright if that's what you intended.
I think the shading is good. But the thing that bothers me the most are the position of the legs. There is no way in hell you can get someone to twist their leg so that both feet are sideways in the opposite direction. At least one foot has to be pointed forward or in a slant or something. And i agree with the crotch comment too.

Otherwise a very nice picture so far. =)

Codax · Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2000 7:12 am

I don't mean to sound like a pervert, but her crotch needs more definition, even skin tight riding pants have a few tension folds. Also the right side of her hed needs hair...she's kina bald there. I'd prolly be fun to put a real ranch picture in there as a background.

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lesssster · Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2000 10:38 am

ok even though shes a cartoon character, her breasts *giggle like a little girl* are like a man's either 1 of 2 things. remove the cleavage and sort of just round em a bit, and remember, breasts are 'teardrops' heehehe. i always wanted to say that. and um yeah her arms look weird to me...

Delucubus · Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2000 9:53 pm

Hey thanks everyone for the comments.

I see how akward her crotch looks. But about the legs, try the stance and you'll see that that pose is perfectly possible. And I fixed the hair on the right side after i posted the image. Thanks again.