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Slipknot
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 15, 2000 7:48 am     Reply with quote
Hi Forum,
this is nearly my first post here and I thus want to introduce myself to you as well as get feedback on the last four images I created. They were all done from a b/w-sketch another artist did for the upcoming PC-game "Kohan".









I would greatly appreciate any feedback on the images. Thanks...

Bleick Bleicken www.sunflowers.de

[This message has been edited by Slipknot (edited December 15, 2000).]
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 15, 2000 8:17 am     Reply with quote
Wow. I really love those. I am a big fantasy fan though and therefore I am biased but I really like your coloring.

Only two crits are that the first girl's metal thing on her back is extremely shiny. There seems to be a lot of light hitting it but her hair and cheek dont have the same light sorce. On the second girl it all looks great except that her neck seems a little odd. Like it's not turning completelly right with her head. Other than that I love them.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 15, 2000 8:29 am     Reply with quote
goddem this is SO good

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 15, 2000 9:48 am     Reply with quote
omg ... these look so super ... you almost forget to look at the details .... ... you both (you and the man that did the b/w sketches) r good ... keep up the good work ...

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 15, 2000 9:56 am     Reply with quote
Those are extremely good, the first one reminds me of "Predator"
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 15, 2000 11:15 am     Reply with quote
damn! I really dig the zombie pilot or whatever he is!

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 15, 2000 11:21 am     Reply with quote
Slipknot: Very nice work! Welcome to the forum!
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 15, 2000 11:23 am     Reply with quote
Really nice looking women youve drawn....

your demon-things are..... interesting...

very well rendered though...

nice work!!

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 15, 2000 5:35 pm     Reply with quote
Hey it must be xmas, this shit is great!
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 16, 2000 3:39 am     Reply with quote
Wow! Very nice and realistic coloring on them all. I would have to pick the 1st and 3rd one in particular. Nicely done!

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 16, 2000 3:56 am     Reply with quote
I really love the dead pilot or whatever it is...really great!!!
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 16, 2000 4:53 am     Reply with quote
Hell-loooo talent!!!!

Whoa! Where do you guys spring from? When I worked in games I only met a handful of really talented artists (of the illustration kind, not the 3D kind, that's another story) in eight years! Seems like every European games company has two or more awesome artists.

Makes me want to get another games job..

Cheers, A.
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 16, 2000 5:04 am     Reply with quote
Hi and welcome! These are very fine quality, very professional. I especially like the mood of the redhead pic and the realism in that zombie-goblin-pilot pic (or whatever it is). Nothing to crit there, nice work.
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 16, 2000 1:58 pm     Reply with quote
mmmmwwwow! i like it a lot, especially the 3rd one kick arse style..

oh yeah, welcome to da forum..

-kardis
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 16, 2000 2:13 pm     Reply with quote
hey - this is some very hot stuff you�ve got there
i love the colors and the zombie/goblin pilot - what a sick combination
and look at the last pic - is�nt this cathrine zeta jones ?
good work indeed - und das von einem deutschen landsmann

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 17, 2000 2:01 am     Reply with quote
welcome
great pics
hmmmmm criticsm?
-I think the nose of the woman in the second pic looks a bit unsymmetrically(-->schief)
and if I'm picky I would say her ear needs some work
looks a bit flat

but thats small details
hope to see more of your works soon


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Slipknot
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 18, 2000 2:15 am     Reply with quote
Thanks a lot for all the feedback!
I am really glad I found this forum. It is always easy to receive criticism at work - but positive feedback is rare.
Feels good.
I will try my best to avoid these little "mistakes" in human faces, but it is so hard to draw them correctly. Monsters are much easier!



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Slipknot
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 18, 2000 3:21 am     Reply with quote
Hey "A",
we are seriously looking for artists at the moment, and Australia is not far from Germany... :o)

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Jaymo
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 18, 2000 5:50 am     Reply with quote
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Originally posted by Slipknot:
Hey "A",
we are seriously looking for artists at the moment, and Australia is not far from Germany... )



Aha? Well, germany is even less far from germany. Next year I'll be done with my Mediengestalterausbildung ( ), then I'd like to enter the game development field. So count me in as interested (TechnoMage is looking good!). Maybe we can meet at USF 2001? Drop me an e-mail if interested...

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