[asmodie]

I need helt with the nose and to get the face to look more feminin...any I deas?

Here is a sketch from last night.

[Dryfire]

ouch, i'm afraid, i think u meant ot post this:

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[[Shizo]]

ehe ehe.. khmm
Shizo is also afraid now.

[Anthony J]

quietly turns

and runs


ehem

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[Tinusch]

I want a girl like that. Mmmhmm.

[Akolyte]

...and the infamous Man-Whore strikes again, complete with dual-colored greased hair, and chia-pet breasts. Witness the horror folks.

[galen]

ok..wait...i'm somewhat confused...

did you paint that??? because if you did, i'd have to say that you should stick to traditional mediums...this computer thing isnt for you....



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[Light]

Well, hmm this face has some good points but doesnt look too good by standard definitions.

You made a nice indication of the zygomatic bones. Her eyes are placed about right (maybe a little low for her age or it could just be her hair). You've also indicated the rib cage and the uhm.. hmm the two cords that from from neck.

The proportions are pretty good. There are some problems with it though.

The head is too big. The eyes are not aligned properly (although I like the way they slant upward). The hair is not well formed and doesnt seem to grow out properly. Theres little indication of perspective.

The lines are too dark and scratchy. The chin seems to be exaggerated.

Her nose is a bit long. Try to just indicate the shadow underneath the nose (make a little wavey line) or just the nostrils instead of drawing in all the planes changes.

Her eye lashes appear to be pasted on. They dont follow the form of the head. The shading is flat.

The amount of space between the eyes is pretty good but the head is not wide enough overall.

Anyway, this is an interesting style but you should probably work on basics. Anyway just try for a softer look (you can use layers).

Good luck.

[asmodie]

It's just a sketch...that i colored.

And I havent even tryed to shade och hilight yet. Coz...I need help fixing the nose? What do I do wrong?! I mean as u said, I'm trying to learn the basics here. And I need first of all need whith the nose? And second to make the face more feminin

So thanx Light. Thats a bit on the wa�...

[Budoka]

It's good as it is, if you want the nose to look less [broken] though, I would suggest getting reference and sketching over it.
{{The baby looks a bit odd to me though}}

Look up this site for tutorials, http://www.jdillon.net - they're not brilliant but may help a little with your first picture of that, that, thing!

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[Budoka]

ohh. now i really feel sick!

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