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peter · Posted: Wed Dec 13, 2000 6:20 am

hi,

i would very appreciate critics on this pic. did i maked any graphical errors/exceptions e.g. regarding anatomy ?

cheers
peter

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sprout · Posted: Wed Dec 13, 2000 6:32 am

looks good, but my only real critiques are in the face... the eyes are a tad on the big side, and look like they are taped open, you might try shrinking them down and changing the shape a bit... the nose doesn't have any real definition, remember, you don't need to draw ever line of the nose, just the darkest shades: mainly the underside...

ok, but what do I know, if you've seen my pictures, I have no room to talk

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peter · Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2000 2:24 pm

thanks for pointing that out... i ve tried to improve the face a little:

any other critics/comments ?

cheers
peter

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[This message has been edited by peter (edited December 15, 2000).]

nt · Posted: Fri Dec 15, 2000 1:25 pm

Hi Peter! Nice work I really like it! Quite simple but still so cool!

Those clothes gives me an plastic feeling I don't know if you made it to look like that but IT*S SUPER COOL!

Dives · Posted: Fri Dec 15, 2000 1:35 pm

I can't draw shit but since you can i can tell you my oppinion

Clean it up. Remove the unnecessary lines on the globe. Kinda weird place for the boots to be cracked isn't it? Maybe you should place the cracks in the lower part of the boot, maybe like she has been kicking a lot of ppl.
Love the boobs. I think maybe the arms are a little simple. But all together i like the picture(theme and drawin.) Oh i also think the eyes are huge. That was my 2 cents. Hope this is enough criticism for you.

Psionic · Posted: Fri Dec 15, 2000 1:37 pm

I like it a lot, No Crit about anatomy and stuff 'cus it doesn't need it, in my opinion. Nice style.

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Tron · member Member # Joined: 15 Dec 2000 Posts: 118

I like your pic.
Ther�s one thing eith the right leg, I think there�s something wrong with the perpektive (-> German ?) , it looks like it begins in middle of the body, it doesn�t look very plastic too.
but i still like the texture,
good work

peter · Posted: Sat Dec 16, 2000 12:48 am

ggrrr... quite few resonance !

please give me some critics...
come on, buddies!

cheers
peter