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dr . bang
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 14, 2000 8:25 pm     Reply with quote
This picture took me alot of hard work and time, please tell me what you think. Thanks!

p.s: Made without any picture reference





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PostPosted: Thu Dec 14, 2000 8:39 pm     Reply with quote
Looks nice. The pic seems a little inconsistent: the eyes and lips seem far too sharp in comparison to the rest of the pic, which has a softer look. Also, might want to thin out the hear in front of her ear a little, so that they look less like sideburns. Hope I was helpful

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 14, 2000 8:43 pm     Reply with quote
It looks pretty nice, but I agree with Chan. You really needa shave the sideburns off that chick.

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 14, 2000 8:48 pm     Reply with quote
I fixed it, notice any difference?

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 14, 2000 9:18 pm     Reply with quote
the picture is not very realistic but that might just be your style. the lips seems to not be in line with the nose. the lips are more to the left of the face and the nose is alright.

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 15, 2000 3:48 am     Reply with quote
The eyeliner, lipstick and the heart on the necklace are all too BRIGHT and SHARP.

When I first loaded it up I thought you drew those on a pic (like you would draw a moustache on some picture in jest)

Need to tone them down, line up the lips in perspective with the farside cheek as it goes into the distance, and shade them into the pic. Also the philtrum (that little indentation below the nose and above the lips) needs to be lined up properly with the lips when you re-align them for perspective

The 'sideburns everyone mentions is because I think you were trying to emulate the hair in front of the ear, as hanging. If so, the hair would actually hang down more off of the ear as gravity pulled it straight down.

Everything else looks very good, the softness and the anatomical placement look good to me.

Hope this is helpful, I'm no master I just call it how I see it.



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PostPosted: Fri Dec 15, 2000 1:41 pm     Reply with quote
wow, these are the mistake that i should figure out but oh well, this is what happen when you work on a pic straight from start to finish without having a break
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 15, 2000 2:07 pm     Reply with quote
well i like the necklage and eyes. But everything else is blurry and choppy. So i thin you should either make everything blurry or sharp. Also i think the shape of the head is strange and so art he lips. Also that is the most eaven hair i have ever seen. Totally flat on the left. No strands or enything.
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