[mk]

Hi there...

ive made some pics and wish some....aehm...some critique...









[This message has been edited by mk (edited December 14, 2000).]

[mk]

had to be splited...sorry
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So, and now some pics i made for an upcomig PC-Game. Take a look at it: www.kohan.de
I only "colorized" it...means the pencil sketch was from someone diffrent... well, i dont even know his name
For some ideas/tips iam allways open...
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Yo, that was it allready

Thnx for the time...
mk

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[sacrelicious]

I don't know why no one's responded yet, these are great pieces. You have an excellent style and I like your varied techniques. No critiques because I don't know what you're hoping to accomplish, and because I like this stuff too much. Keep up the good work! I definitely would like to see more.

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[Kjetil Nystuen]

Hello MK, I think you deserve some attention on these. I like the pose on nr.3, very well balanced. Nr. 2 has a nice facial expression. Looks like an old black/white movie..

I have a question: it really looks like your main skills are on texturing and coloring, rather than drawing. (shapes, anatomy...blabla..) Am I right?

-Kjetil

[mk]

Thanks for that

Somehow strange. Did i made something wrong? Is the heading too small? I hope that other persons see the Posting and telling me their opinion. But thank you anyway. Motivation is also okay

To the rest here... without criticism I cant learn, at least only very slow. Someting must be wrong in my images...tell me pls.

Greetz mk

[silber]

hi there
criticism?
hmmm ok I will try
first one:-the face seems a bit flat
and how about some highlights to define the shapes a bit more

second one:-that one I like the most
reminds me a bit of the imparator(-->german?)
of star wars
if you would like to go on in this pic I would make his clothing a bit more interesting

third one:-well think you need to work on it
a bit more...kinda unfinished
if it isn't a sketch(for your game?) I would suggest a stronger pose

last one:-his head seems a bit small
and his arm or his bizeps(german?)
looks also a bit off

hope this was any help


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[mk]

Moin,

hab alles so mitgekriegt
Jupp, danke. Ich werde etwas beim Gesicht machen...Highlights und so.
Beim Bizeps zu gross, Gesicht zu klein Problem... ich wollte einen K�mpfer wie aus diesem franz�sischem Comic : Zeit der Asche.
Der Kaempfer heisst Morkai oder sowas. Cooler Comic, empfehelenswert... gute Zeichnungen und so....
aehm ja... zur Unterhaltung unserer englisch sprechenden Mitmenschen werde ich das ganze mal unbearbeitet mit Babelfisch �bersetzen

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Moin, everything mitgekriegt in such a way Jupp, thanks. I will make something with the face... Highlight and so. With the Bizeps excessively, face too small problem... I wanted a fighter as from this French Comic: Time of ash. The fighter is called Morkai or sowas. Cooler Comic, empfehelenswert... good drawings and... aehm... for the maintenance of our English speaking fellow men I will in such a way translate the whole times rough with Babelfisch

Greetz MK

��Kjetil Nystuen: Well, i dont know exactly what you mean. I like to make an picture in every single step...one Problem i have is that when iam painting on a small sized format i have some problems with the anatomy...just because i dont have enough space for all the muscles and so...
Was that the right answer?



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[Maruman]

woW these works are REALLY COOL!!! mk .. i wonder why noone is replying ... this post should have atleast 30 replys by now :-) hehe anyway great work..
i really like the first pic... the 4th one looks a bit unfinished but i'm sure you know that :-)

hehe i really like your style ... to you have a website with lagrer pics up ??



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[mk]

ahhh....yes a short question...in which order this forum updates? Its a bit strange...(ive only seen forums where u directly see all the threads and answers...)
and its a bit confusing...i dont see any order...ok, that was it..

Thnx MK

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[Awetopsy]

I like your 5th and 6th...


youve got a really nice style.

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[mk]

hehe i really like your style ... to you have a website with lagrer pics up ??

Hello. yes i have a site look at the Signature

ive upped the 2D stuff now but its an temporary site...means no Thumbs and so...
but you can watch it...to navigate in my site, read the adress in the lower left corner

Cya on tour

MK





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