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Flexible Elf · Posted: Fri Dec 08, 2000 1:11 pm

Way cool stuff as always Owl!

Heheheh holiday business.. ugh.
Speaking of which, see you at work =]

-Flexible Elf

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Rhomb · Posted: Fri Dec 08, 2000 1:36 pm

Hehehe, still going strong. You really have a cool style. I have one suggestion: in the last cell you could've zoomed even closer in to that pool, with only few stalks of grass and big green bubbles filling the cell. Now the movement seems to stop to the second last cell because the content in last two is almost the same.

-Ville

MisterOwl · Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2000 12:46 am

Here's page five. Along with it, I've posted some links to the previous pages. Page 6 might be a little late because of the holiday business...sorry. Hope you enjoy these!

Page 4:http://www.geocities.com/nmalara2000/pg4.jpg
Page 3:http://www.geocities.com/nmalara2000/pg03.jpg
Page 2: http://www.geocities.com/nmalara2000/pg2.jpg
Page 1: http://www.geocities.com/nmalara2000/pg1new.jpg

Comments and critiques are always welcome. Thanks for viewing!

Spydur · Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2000 12:51 am

Having been to Alabama many times I can tell you that this may very well be a true story! HAHA I love everything about it. Gonna go check out the other ones.

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twisted · Posted: Wed Dec 13, 2000 2:03 am

Awesome as always! The suspense is killing me! I can't wait to see the next page and when you get into the main characters. You have excellent story-telling powers.

Just curious - What font do you use in the talk bubbbles?

Keep 'em comin...

Moonlord · Posted: Wed Dec 13, 2000 2:23 am

Great cartoon Owl.
I really do like it a lot especially
the alien parents look so funny *g*

can't wait for the next page...

TheMilkMan · Posted: Wed Dec 13, 2000 1:22 pm

Damn man you are to good I like your eye for perspective and you know how to use it to tell a story that is a talent in itself!! Good work keep putting them up when you get a chance

zero21 · Posted: Wed Dec 13, 2000 5:27 pm

*Happiness* Cool! have been following the story and find I can't wait for the next page!!!

I really like the way you bring your characters out and the story flows really nicely.

While the last two panels do tend to drag the flow of things, the zooming in on the green goo effect I think is just hightening the anticipation for what is going to happen next.

Given the quality thus far, and the flair in the story telling department, I look forward to the next page.

Seriously fantastic work! Gotta know what happens next.
(and also does the young female character finally get to use the bathroom? your feeling bad about that I hope, it's a terrible state to stuck in for three pages!)

BrunnenG · Posted: Wed Dec 13, 2000 6:25 pm

I can't wait to see the rest of the panels. These are starting out great. I found the font over at Tucows: http://freethemes.kr.psi.net/fonts/adnload/55472.html

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MisterOwl · Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2000 12:46 am

Thanks to all for such great remarks.

Rhomb-

That last panel bothered me as it does tend to slow the flow down a bit. A silly misteak, I appologize. Thanks for making it known to me, I won't be so lazy in the future.

Twisted & Moonlord-

I'm glad you enjoy my cartoons so much. Thank you for your encouragement. Twisted-- the font I use is called something like "Edible Pet" I found it on some website that someone from this forum provided me with. I'm sorry I don't remember the address. Hopefully someone else here can provide you with it. I wish I could help you out.

Thanks again all!

Infinity · Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2000 12:53 am

NICE!... not only that it looks good... it's also very funny!

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