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gabereiser · Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2000 9:33 pm

here is a quick sketch for SIJUN, and only for SIJUN. Hope you like it, it's not much but I made it in about 10 min. (really)

let me know what you think.

Optical · Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2000 9:45 pm

wow, authentic hey? eheh.. what did you do before to say that?

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http://www.eccentrix.com/artist/0ptical

Bye bye Lets get high and ride Oh, how do we do these niggas But I'm not gonna cry I'm a Bad Boy killa Jay-Z die too Looking out for Mobb Deep Nigga when I find you Weak mutha-fuckas don't deserve to breathe
How many niggas down to die for me yea yea" - Makaveli

"Got my money in my pocket, finger on the trigger and I ain't taking no shit from no niggaz" -2pac

gabereiser · Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2000 9:49 pm

it was mainly directed towards the "old school" forum members, something to show them that I am not what they think I am. Thats all, you would know what I am talking about if you are one of those people.

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synj · Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2000 9:55 pm

hehehe you circled your signature and even wrote a little about it. that's even more fishy if you ask me but i believe you drew this particular piece regardless.

-synj www.synj.net

Optical · Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2000 10:07 pm

i'm as old school as it gets man, oct '99 hehe.

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http://www.eccentrix.com/artist/0ptical

Bye bye Lets get high and ride Oh, how do we do these niggas But I'm not gonna cry I'm a Bad Boy killa Jay-Z die too Looking out for Mobb Deep Nigga when I find you Weak mutha-fuckas don't deserve to breathe
How many niggas down to die for me yea yea" - Makaveli

"Got my money in my pocket, finger on the trigger and I ain't taking no shit from no niggaz" -2pac

nori · Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2000 10:14 pm

you're still lame

elam · Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2000 11:18 pm

His right bicep is fucked up. Too big and low. His abs are too small as well. Not a bad drawing otherwise, though.
elam

Ko · Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2000 11:42 pm

I don't like you...

Ko

sacrelicious · Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2000 12:40 am

Nice title, Gabe. You want redemption? Poof, you're redeemed... wait, I forgot... YOU'RE the fairy, not me.

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mmm... sacrelicious

Snake Grunger · Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2000 1:00 am

There's nothing much in the pic that could be defined as good.. or if something is good, it's bad if you look furthere, here watch:

The hand's pretty good! But wait a minute.. it's way too small.. totally out of perspective.

Or

Hey, the right pectoral is pretty good.. but wait a minute, the left one is all wrong!

ceenda · member Member # Joined: 27 Jun 2000 Posts: 2030

At least binder was funny.

McSteed · Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2000 10:29 am

Now I see why you stole others artwork!

ceenda · member Member # Joined: 27 Jun 2000 Posts: 2030

Yeah, Dhab's right, sorry.

As to your pic, I could show you a few early pics of mine which were kinda skewed. Try practicing some more simple objects before diving into anatomy. For instance, coffee mugs, books, things around the house. Anything that you can sketch easily. I think your main problem is with proportion at the moment. You've actually put some good shading in there.

When sketching in a book, one of the best ways to check whether you're on the right track is to go up to a mirror and look at the reflection of your drawing. Quite often this shows the areas that are skewed and out of proportion.

Tinusch · Posted: Tue Dec 12, 2000 12:01 am

Forget about what he did before. He obviously drew this and is trying to better his skills.

I don't know much about anatomy myself, but I can definitely see some problems. The whole thing is skewed a little. It's all off center.

micke · Posted: Tue Dec 12, 2000 12:12 am

No need to be rude...

Speve-o-matic · Posted: Tue Dec 12, 2000 12:33 am

The whole chest area has massive problems. I haven't seen anyone to date with abdominals that start that low down before. The positioning of the zyphoid process in your man is way too low, you've given him about 3 or 4 extra ribs.

He looks like he's had open heart surgery, with those wierd marks running down his chest.

Time to haul out the anatomy books eh Gabe.

- Steve

Flexible Elf · Posted: Tue Dec 12, 2000 12:38 am

Well, I thought I might add something positive, though it pains me to do so.

The whole picture seemed to be skewed/distorted a bit like <<A>>

So I took it into photoshop and distorted it to <<B>> to reach a more proportionate drawing and added some lines to try and trim down some stuff I saw, to show how the anatomy was angled and to represent foreshortening.

In a hurry, sorry about the sloppiness.

-Flexible Elf

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http://www.geocities.com/flexible_elf/Main.html

Dhabih · Posted: Tue Dec 12, 2000 12:40 am

oh look!: http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/Forum2/HTML/007134.html

if you have nothing nice to say or no constructive criticism, just let this thread go, its really not necessary to throw in your insults just for the hell of it.

[This message has been edited by Dhabih (edited December 11, 2000).]